 rainbowlicious9 2005-05-11 . chapter 1i just wanted to tell you that i read one of your reviews, and i was highly impressed. (it was for that disasterous "whore-mione" fic "Comeplete Difference.") i pretty much lashed out irrationally at her... oh, and you might want to read my Harry/draco slash parody? it pokes fun (in a nice way) of all the bad (more emphasis!) BAD Harry/Draco slash. |
 bookworm-jill 2005-03-03 . chapter 1Ahem, as I don't believe you'd ever click on my story again; if I put this in the next chapter as an author note you'd never see it, which is why I shall tell you now. I am basing this on a roleplay game, and as i'm sure the participents of it will read it, I had to keep the original beginning even though I agree with you that Hermione getting raped by a Malfoy would never happen (I hint at that in the story), however just so you'll know I am not a dunce, the charactor insanity was all me and I assure you I know alot on the topic as it is an interest of mine. Furthermore, I am a ninth grader and I feel that it is unnescesary for you to have to tap into your 'inner child'. I don't feel that young ^_^. I hope to have more constructive criticism from you in the future. Biology is evidently your subject and it shouldn't have surprised me to find something like this. Speaking of this, since it's a review i'll tell you what I think. I felt bad for Snape until I remembered that he wants to be a DADA teacher and if he thinks it is the DADA teacher's obligation then it should be very good for him. Other than that, I see no problems. You seem to have a very well written story. P.S. I agree with you, doing a story that starts out saying that Harry has had a crush on Draco Malfoy since first year is something I won't read either. However, I can't say the same about your opinion on the reviewers who only say, "omg this is great". Some reviewers simply don't know what to say, and I am more than happy to accept those kinds of reviews, (although constructive criticism is welcome) those kinds of reviews tell me I have an audience and they do help to fuel my motivation to write. Thank you again for your input. I know the beginning is ridiculous, but as I've said it was not my idea. My contribution to this fic was making Remus be a schitzophrenic (which according to books i've read it is likely that he is) and making Harry go mad after the death of his stepson. Sorry if I appear redundant in any way. Thank you for your review |