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FireChildSlytherin5
2006-03-08 . chapter 1
Werid. Is the tour guard is Liz from that cartoon from "the Magic School Bus" Science show?
rainbowlicious9
2005-05-11 . chapter 1
i just wanted to tell you that i read one of your reviews, and i was highly impressed. (it was for that disasterous "whore-mione" fic "Comeplete Difference.") i pretty much lashed out irrationally at her... oh, and you might want to read my Harry/draco slash parody? it pokes fun (in a nice way) of all the bad (more emphasis!) BAD Harry/Draco slash.
cecelle
2005-04-11 . chapter 1
I homeschool my kids, and guess what we are studying right now?
Bless you! I didn't think there was a way to make a walkthrough of the eukaryotic cell actually enjoyable...
Sicily Bean
2005-03-14 . chapter 1
Wow. I actually enjoyed reading that! It almost reminded me of a ride at Disneyworld or something -- trust me, it's a good thing. :) I hope you got a good grade for this; it was very creatively done.
AriKitten
2005-03-05 . chapter 1
I'm a new biology-lover!! lol. "The mitochondrion was a happy place". Love it.
bookworm-jill
2005-03-03 . chapter 1
Ahem, as I don't believe you'd ever click on my story again; if I put this in the next chapter as an author note you'd never see it, which is why I shall tell you now. I am basing this on a roleplay game, and as i'm sure the participents of it will read it, I had to keep the original beginning even though I agree with you that Hermione getting raped by a Malfoy would never happen (I hint at that in the story), however just so you'll know I am not a dunce, the charactor insanity was all me and I assure you I know alot on the topic as it is an interest of mine. Furthermore, I am a ninth grader and I feel that it is unnescesary for you to have to tap into your 'inner child'. I don't feel that young ^_^. I hope to have more constructive criticism from you in the future. Biology is evidently your subject and it shouldn't have surprised me to find something like this. Speaking of this, since it's a review i'll tell you what I think. I felt bad for Snape until I remembered that he wants to be a DADA teacher and if he thinks it is the DADA teacher's obligation then it should be very good for him. Other than that, I see no problems. You seem to have a very well written story. P.S. I agree with you, doing a story that starts out saying that Harry has had a crush on Draco Malfoy since first year is something I won't read either. However, I can't say the same about your opinion on the reviewers who only say, "omg this is great". Some reviewers simply don't know what to say, and I am more than happy to accept those kinds of reviews, (although constructive criticism is welcome) those kinds of reviews tell me I have an audience and they do help to fuel my motivation to write. Thank you again for your input. I know the beginning is ridiculous, but as I've said it was not my idea. My contribution to this fic was making Remus be a schitzophrenic (which according to books i've read it is likely that he is) and making Harry go mad after the death of his stepson. Sorry if I appear redundant in any way. Thank you for your review
Alleyprowler
2005-03-01 . chapter 1
I can't believe I just read a self-insert that I actually liked. Very well-done, entertaining and informative.

I hope your bio prof liked it as much as I did.
harrysmom
2005-02-28 . chapter 1
I came to this story by way of your LJ. I think it is great. My friend teaches high school bio and I am going to recommend it to her. It is a really brilliant idea as well as a damn good science lesson.
My only question, how did the professor grade it? You must have outdone the 9th graders.
~harrysmom~
Nota Lone
2005-02-28 . chapter 1
Man, I wish we did stuff like that in science. Very interesting. I also think I (horror of horrors) LEARNED something! :)
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