... How DOES she get those blood stains off her uniform? Oxiclean?

-slumps over in chair-
He really had a sucky childhood, didn't he?
I feel like crying... over an anime character. A FICTIONAL anime character. I'm losing it.

Not only do I rant to random authors, I give out unwanted advice! Woo.
If the author of another book reviews a different fan fiction, it shouldn't matter. To all your reviewers, your story is probably way better. It's original, well-written, and the rare grammatical and spelling mistakes I see are minor things like you forgot a letter or something like that. So what if an author reviewed another story? It shouldn't make you feel bad because your story is amazing too. You're an amazing author and one review to a different story shouldn't change that status. Don't worry about stuff like that. It's an author and I bet if you got a book published, your story would outstrip theirs on every bestseller list there is. Don't sweat it.

InuYasha reminds me of my friend so much, I just want to smack both of them. They both think they don't deserve the things they have in life, blah blah blah.
My friend is lucky I only see him at church over the summer or I swear I'd hit him.
I've got to stop ranting to authors...

They only play two episodes of InuYasha at 4 and 4:30 on Sunday mornings.
It. Sucks.

But anyways... Freakin' Nanashi.
I'd like to rip his head off and shove it so far up his butt, not even surgery will be able to get it out.

Sesshomaru's fluffy, tail or no?
A) Pfft, NO.
It protects him and keeps Rin warm. -fangirl "aw!"-

Will you answer no to this question?
C) Is this a trick question?

Do you think that demons exist in Kagome's era but are just unseen?
B) Of course! Demons live for a long time!

Will you come visit me on deviantArt?
C) How do you think I got the link for your account?

The real review:
... You know Miroku wanted to do that from the start.

You know... I think I'm just going to add myself into a very small section of your story... Just real quick.

“InuYasha… what kind of man ARE you? To raise your sword against an unarmed man? How horrible… and here I thought you were worthy not to be spat on…” he (Nanashi) said, sighing and shaking his head.
(And here's where I totally butcher this little part of your story... XD)
As the hanyou opened his mouth to reply, a bright, white light appeared in the corner of the room. An extremely tall girl with long, brunette hair and hazel eyes stepped out of the light. Her gray t-shirt rippled in the strong breeze created by the appearance of the light. Her hair whipped around her face.
"Nanashi," she said softly, almost as if she was trying to pursuade him with her feminine charm. ((The dork leaving this review had to stop tying for a second merely so she could laugh her head off at how completely stupid that sentence sounded.))
"Who the hell are you?" InuYasha yelled, turning his Tetsusaiga toward the girl.
"I am Mello," she said as the white light behind her disappeared.
"I'm sorry, although you know my name, I don't believe we have met," Nanashi said, offering his hand for her to shake.
With a sigh, the girl gave up on the false act of "angelism" and "all mighty-ness". She thwacked the ridiculous man on the side of his head.
"Get off your high horse, you idiot."
The mismatched group of misfits stood to the side, merely watched with slightly shocked expressions as this unknown girl told this demon? human? off.
"You are a stupid, stupid man. I mean really, who kills a child and then doesn't even realize he did it?" Mello yelled in an exasperated tone. "Gah, you are such a baka!" She thwacked him again. "You are a ridiculous, pathetic man who deserves to jump off a cliff, be eaten by ravenous sharks below, reincarnate yourself in an extremely painful manner, be skinned and boiled alive by some hick village in the panhandle of Oklahoma, eaten by those hick people, and regurgitated so as to fill the stomachs of little baby birds."
"That's rather graphic," Nanashi said after a moment of silence.
"It would be worse but I'd rather keep this review T rated," she glared. Another flash of white light appeared but in her hands this time. In her left palm rested a large basket overflowing with apples, bananas, and sporks. White mice scurried around the basket, munching on the fruit or looking at the man hungrily. In her right hand rested a staff not unlike Miroku's but made of pure silver, intricately carved with runes and images. Both ends pointed into arrow tips, glinting cruelly in the light.
Mello set the basket down and picked up an apple. She threw it at Nanashi's head, leaving too small a goose egg for her to be happy. With a nod from the evil girl, the mice scurried out of the basket and began devouring Nanashi's toes and fingers.
Mello pointed the staff at the man's throat and watched his Adam's apple bob as he gulped. "You don't have the guts to kill me," he bluffed.
"Oh how I wish I did," she glared. "But for now, we'll stick with a common Princess Bride quote." He looked at her, confusion clear on his face. She sighed. "Hello, my name is Mihael Keehl. You threaten to kill my InuYasha, prepare to die." With a quick jerk of her wrist, the staff (spear might be a more accurate term) moved from his throat and left a deep scratch across his right cheek. Another scratch appeared on the other cheek.
Mello had taken three steps away from the man (whose toes and fingers had been devoured already) before turning back, punching him square in the nose (it wouldn't be right if his nose didn't break!), and kicking him where the sun, thankfully, don't shine.
She snapped her fingers and the mice moved away from the shrieking man. Another white light appeared and Mello stepped into it, her mice following loyally, after waving to the other characters.
InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Sango, Kirara, and Makura stared at the place the strange girl had disappeared at.
"That was...," Kagome trailed off.
"Yeah," the others finished.


I do believe this is the longest review I have ever written. And I write a lot of reviews. XD
Just had to get that out of my sistem.

I know it says that I'd review every chapter I read on my page, but I got really, really caught up with this story. And there are a lot of chapters! So I'll go back... XD
But I had to review NOW.

This chapter... I swear, it deserves the nobel prize or whatever prize they give well-written stories (I never said I was smart). It was totally in-character (or as in-character as I believe they would be if they ever ended up in a situation like this). The way Kagome and InuYasha were debating towards the end when Kagome was trying to bring InuYasha back was truly amazing. I just... wow. I can't even put into words how freakin' awesome that was. Just... dang.

I do believe it's ironic that you get really sick when you're writing this story. XD
Even though you're probably already over that sickness, get well soon!

Hahahaha I like Naraku's and Kagome's down at the bottom.
You'd think they'd know that already...

I want to rub his ears... They look so soft and cute!

WOO! WE'RE NOT THE ONLY ONES!
My friend and I call Sesshomaru "Fluffykins" too. And we call the giant squid from the deleted scenes of The Goonies Fluffy. Don't know why, but we do.

If you didn't do the kids yet I'm gonna tell ya which ones I would like them to have. oh one question Can I put two down for the kids?

C
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Oh and to tell you Inu's hair looks like some shade of white to me. So I kinda agree with you with his hair color. Oh and his human eye color it's actually brown.

C.D.

hey i really like your story and i am looking forward to the next chapter

1. A (no, it's a parasite youkai.. if I'm not wrong..)
2. B
3. B (of course they live, just.. stay low..)
4. A (you have a dA? YAY~)