Hey, I I liked the story and I just wanted to let you know that you can rent the Jumpstreed series from the library, most of them have it, if they don't you can get them shipped to the library of your choosing, free of cost. I know this is like, 10 years later, but by chance you think, "hey, it be nice to watch those again," there ya go. :)

This is so sad! :(

Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

Not a bad story. You did a good job in writing it.

Wow... that was really really sad...

(Good, quite good,) but really really sad...

to tell you the truth - i like almost all of the stories over here about 21js, but this one i realy dont - ther is no plot and except of being realy sad - it's have nothind in it. i don't mind of agony, but in order to be strong it's need to have a little story.

Great! Great story! Loved it! It was sad, but it was real good! Keep on writing!

Great! Wonderful! Read my stories! (I hope I wasn't too subtle for you.)

Wow! {shocked look} That was really wow... Wow as in a good wow.

Really sad but still a very good story.

wow that was really sad but really good

write more stories soon you are a really good writer