Palpatine's curses for the kids are quite fitting for the characters. However, I felt the story was too rushed and I really can't picture Padme pointing a blaster to her own head for any reason (but it may be that I don't believe that she died in ROTS from losing her will to live.)

So cute! And I love that the three perfect Star Wars couples are kept together so well! Sleeping Beauty really does work in the SW world!

Hee hee hee, that rocks. I love it.

"And they lived happily ever after (except when Han decided to stir up some trouble—once a rogue, always a rogue)."

lol Very funny! I really enjoyed it.

Aww, that was a very nice take on a fairy tale :) I loved it

I like old fashioned fairy stories. And I love the word chagrin'. I wrote it once in an English essay and the teacher didnt know what it meant though!

The ending was a little rushed but so are most fairy tale endings.

Well Done. You could do a whole line of them. A little Mermaid set on Mon Calamari! Beuty and the Beast with Wookies! No? Alright then.

The twins have both been kissed! Hopefully this will be a story that ends happily! I'm loving the way you've twisted both stories, Deja. You've managed to fit both together so well. Great work! :)

Lucky droids? Perhaps, but Han certainly won't think *he* is very lucky when he finds out who are his electronic companions. :D

Leia in carbonite! Nice. (Not for her, of course.) And who was it that found our poor Luke? And why can't he wake up?

I didn't like the style of this chapter quite as much... it seemed a bit rushed. However, I'm still interested, and would love more.

MTFBWY,

Saber Girl Leia

great idea! please, keep going!

Even if you had kept the fairy-tale style, Han would *have* to be the same old rogue. It's in his charms, you see. :D

Don't worry, I still like it a lot! :D Han & Leia's banter was tipically wonderful. I had some trouble trying to picture a shy Mara, though... but I guess it's alright, considering she's in her teens here.

Well, this is quite original. I like it... although... "King" Anakin? LOL! Great story. ;)

I think using various styles is cool! And I like how you kept Han IC. Keep posting!

BTW, I love your pen name.

Saber Girl Leia

No disappointment at all! I cannot express how awesome this story is. The fact that you took a fairytale and turned it into a SW story...awesome! It's very good and very ineresting. GREAT JOB!

Good chapter...i like that Han is still the same old rogue hehe :) cant wait to see how everything falls apart