That... was amazing. Really.

I really like your style and this fic just makes me so very happy. I like the use of ghosts and the interactions between Yzak and Nicol. It was really well done! :)

~ Love, C-Phi.

Omg this was beautiful...a truly awesome YzakxNicol story--so rare and hard to find, at least for me. *Sniff* Bravo!

Wow...that is so sweet! Yzak/Nicol is my OTP *heart* although I do know there aren't much around...anyway...

This was...sad and happy at the same time, just like Nicol's expression. I loved him so, why did he have to die?! It's sweet how he only talks with Yzak. One would tend to think that he would confide in Athrun instead. :)

"I set you free." That was THE best line. ^_^ Who knew that Yzak could actually do something nice for someone?

Anyway, I'll stop rambling now. Good job!

Wow, that was probably the most amazing story I've ever read.

O_O...
VAMPIRES! -squee- KiraFllay! -faints- vamp!ASUKIRA -dies-

I can't think straight anymore, after that XD; It was just so incredibly sexy (wow...you're the second review of 210 where I had the need to use that word XD). Just. So. Sexy. XP

Athrun was so evil and pretty =D~! And poor Kira...watching Fllay die (again) ;o;
I was a bit confused with the Immortal ritual...but the love makin' was hawt XD

What happens next? :o Does Athrun take Kira along in his adventures?...I want to know -cries-

~Spyrit

i so luv this chapter!

if he luved kira then why did he betray him?

Keep

Oh ho ho, I assure you, my dear, that this one-shot is EXCELLENT. -blinks- YAY! KYAH! BRILLIANT.
Mhmm, Kira (LOL! Kira always looked so feminine ^.^; so it was particularly easy to see him in a school girl's outfit) is so adorable ;o. Ahaha, Athrun and his comics...but I suppose he needs a hobby ^.^;

I see, so they're supposed to be 'straight' in this story? M...I want to see girl!Kira in public please =3 Heehee, just so that we readers could see what happens when he goes to school.

Yeah, ANYWAY, you *really* should continue this. Like, REALLY. Hahaha, excellent writing =D Hope to read from you soon ;o

~Spyrit

Okay, I loved this. Yzak & Fllay are quickly becoming my favorite SEED couple (even more than Dearka & Milly, who I *adore*), and you're right. There's absolutely not enough fic out there about them. So please, please, pretty, pretty, *please* write more!

I loved reading this fic and especially how you wrote the obsessive side of Athrun. I was definitely surprised by the sudden turn of the events (aka ending). I would think that choosing between Kira and not piloting his gundam for the rest of his life would be an easy choice.. but.. it certainly does beat a cliche ending. Anyways.. there's not a lot of AthrunxKira fics and there definitely isn't enough of the GOOD ones either... so... please write more asukira soon? :D

Gah~ -is anti AsuKira- I can't decide if I like this or not. XD I certainly don't hate it. That's a good sign.

Nn. Despite the pairing, it was well written. I liked the theme, how Athrun betrayed Kira, in a kind of accidental way, and I loved how you re-used the first paragraph.

Soo. Feelings about AsuKira aside, this was good. XD

About midway to the end felt a bit rushed, but otherwise, I like it! A unique idea, and intriguing characterization. There definetly needs to be more Asukira in this world, so I do hope you write more someday!

I don't understand the Yzak/Nicol pairing in general, but I thought this story was cute! Very interesting and unique idea. Especially the end. It's good to see that Yzak changes for the better. I look forward to reading about Nicol's friend.(Hint hint!)

~"He was incapable of wishing ill upon another human being."~
If Nicol could be paraphrased into one sentence, that would be it!!

I don't understand the Yzak/Nicol pairing in general, but I thought this story was cute! Very interesting and unique idea. Especially the end. It's good to see that Yzak changes for the better. I look forward to reading about Nicol's friend.(Hint hint!)

~"He was incapable of wishing ill upon another human being."~
If Nicol could be paraphrased into one sentence, that would be it!