A great story. Very good.

Oh, so sweet... I love this! Very true to the comics, too... I love how this dives into Calvin's fanciful world and handles everything with humor and light irony... I love this! Awesome work, I can't wait to see your next fic!

So cool... and good.

great storie jeff, hope for more from you

I think you should stay away from copying off the strips as it takes away from the point of fan fiction in the first place... Otherwise I like your descriptions of the strip in general.