 bobbyneko 2005-06-29 . chapter 1lol i love your story and the way you deal with your parents, clever ^^; |
 linh 2005-05-05 . chapter 1 do you think I gonna kill you if you won't update? |
 Another Baka 2005-04-22 . chapter 1 wo! UPDATE YOU BAKa! |
 Genki Ninjagirl 2005-03-18 . chapter 1 I'LL KILL YA! POOR Mi-chan... ;.; |
 Digital Lain 2005-03-18 . chapter 1awesome and funny story! Hope you update soon! |
 Anonymous Freak 2005-03-14 . chapter 1 Now now! evil baka! UPDATE SOONER OR DIE!!? |
 Watashi wa BAKA! 2005-03-08 . chapter 1 Hey! I know Tidus and Yuna too! They're so great!
Yuna has a braid like Misao!*giggle* |
 Cutiebobby 2005-03-08 . chapter 1 you're such a...EVIL BAKE! |
 Chibi-Flamer 2005-03-04 . chapter 1 I LUV YOU BAKA!*runup and hug BAKA* |
 Okane-sama 2005-03-04 . chapter 1 This is Money-sama!Remember me anyway?
Well well well,now it's wrong you BAKA!*swing fingers* tsk tsk, you shouldn't say that in front of your parents :P
This is such a nice/funny start! I kinda love the'bra stealing' scene, making Sou's mean have nothing to do with me, actually I like his bratty self too! ;) |
 De Luna 2005-03-03 . chapter 1Whoa, you actually told ur parents that? If I told my parents that, my mom would scrub my mouth with soup and I would be banned from watching anything PG-13 and up. LOL!
I really liked the opening of the whole set-up. It is different from your other ones and the only thing that I think you have to work on is the present and past tense. It sounds like a movie script in the flashback scene with Soujirou being dropped off by his mom.
But other than that, I like it so far! I knew that you would do that underwear scene tied to the flag pole. It came to me all of a sudden when I was walking to my locker on Thursday! XD That last remark was so funny. I didn't know it was yours. Isn't it a little too bad? LOL! |
 MSN-chan 2005-03-03 . chapter 1 Umn,hello BAKA-DONO
Anou... I just think about the title 'love in distance',does it sound ok?*sweatdrop*
Your story DID make me laugh a lot,I hurt my stomach in a process ;P |
 Mashimaro 2005-03-03 . chapter 1 GREAT GREAT GREAT BEGINNING! XD Ops Oo*nosebleed* |
 Love In The Rain 2005-03-03 . chapter 1 O.O how..what? how? ERK! poor Misao!;.; you're so DEAD! |
 Misao Seta 2005-03-03 . chapter 1 Ok,I love this,but Sou's a bit OOC,it's your story anyway! Glad to read such a nice piece like this! |