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bobbyneko
2005-06-29 . chapter 1
lol i love your story and the way you deal with your parents, clever ^^;
linh
2005-05-05 . chapter 1
do you think I gonna kill you if you won't update?
Another Baka
2005-04-22 . chapter 1
wo! UPDATE YOU BAKa!
Genki Ninjagirl
2005-03-18 . chapter 1
I'LL KILL YA! POOR Mi-chan... ;.;
Digital Lain
2005-03-18 . chapter 1
awesome and funny story! Hope you update soon!
Anonymous Freak
2005-03-14 . chapter 1
Now now! evil baka! UPDATE SOONER OR DIE!!?
Watashi wa BAKA!
2005-03-08 . chapter 1
Hey! I know Tidus and Yuna too! They're so great!
Yuna has a braid like Misao!*giggle*
Cutiebobby
2005-03-08 . chapter 1
you're such a...EVIL BAKE!
Chibi-Flamer
2005-03-04 . chapter 1
I LUV YOU BAKA!*runup and hug BAKA*
Okane-sama
2005-03-04 . chapter 1
This is Money-sama!Remember me anyway?
Well well well,now it's wrong you BAKA!*swing fingers* tsk tsk, you shouldn't say that in front of your parents :P
This is such a nice/funny start! I kinda love the'bra stealing' scene, making Sou's mean have nothing to do with me, actually I like his bratty self too! ;)
De Luna
2005-03-03 . chapter 1
Whoa, you actually told ur parents that? If I told my parents that, my mom would scrub my mouth with soup and I would be banned from watching anything PG-13 and up. LOL!

I really liked the opening of the whole set-up. It is different from your other ones and the only thing that I think you have to work on is the present and past tense. It sounds like a movie script in the flashback scene with Soujirou being dropped off by his mom.

But other than that, I like it so far! I knew that you would do that underwear scene tied to the flag pole. It came to me all of a sudden when I was walking to my locker on Thursday! XD That last remark was so funny. I didn't know it was yours. Isn't it a little too bad? LOL!
MSN-chan
2005-03-03 . chapter 1
Umn,hello BAKA-DONO
Anou... I just think about the title 'love in distance',does it sound ok?*sweatdrop*
Your story DID make me laugh a lot,I hurt my stomach in a process ;P
Mashimaro
2005-03-03 . chapter 1
GREAT GREAT GREAT BEGINNING! XD Ops Oo*nosebleed*
Love In The Rain
2005-03-03 . chapter 1
O.O how..what? how? ERK! poor Misao!;.; you're so DEAD!
Misao Seta
2005-03-03 . chapter 1
Ok,I love this,but Sou's a bit OOC,it's your story anyway! Glad to read such a nice piece like this!
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