This looks good so far... you're one of the few fanwriters I've found whose spelling and grammar are flawless. Everyone's in character, too. Good job! ; )

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Interesting turn of events! This should be a very intriuging story!! Can't wait for the next update!

Oh My damn! This is great! I want you to right more! And when will you update A Marauder's Life For Me ? There both excellent! Keep it up!

wow! this is so good! please hurry up and update~! *puppy dog eyes*