|Reviews for It begins now|
| Newsgirl29 3/18/09 . chapter 2
That was wonderful! I just wanted to cry for both of them.
| IsadoraJohnson 1/22/06 . chapter 2
Gorgeous! I love the siri part! I love siriwan and you do it so well! Yay! Great job *adds to fav stories*
| PuffyCheese 10/2/05 . chapter 2
Very nice. Good follow up to the book, and very nice details. Keep up the good work in your other stories!
| XtinethePirate 9/8/05 . chapter 1
I have a feeling that I"m going to like all of your fics. I am a big fan of Obi-Wan/Anakin as a couple (I' writing a fic of them now) but I, too beleive that Obi-Wan ws the true hero of Star Wars,as well as thinking that Luke is a wuss, Vader kicks ass, and I love to delve into the Father/son relationship between Qui-GOn and Obi-Wan.
To the point? I think you captured that perfectly in this story. I'm not too sure of the background on this, I know who Tahl was, and how she died, but I don't know Siri.
Anyhoo, please email me if you wanna talk star wars, my email is on my ff.n account, and I always love to talk to people from overseas (I used to live in Belgium)
Hunh. I didn't talk much about your fic. Allow me to remedy that. Beautifully done. You mentioned you're worried about clarity because you're dyslexic, but you've got nothing to fret about. Your style is very sharp, very unique, and very powerful for emotional fics like this one. I'm going to go read more of them!
| Shannon C. Redfield 7/7/05 . chapter 2
A second chapter...and about Siri! I never would have thought to do one for her, to continue with the heartache and the pain... I could never do such a job with her as I did with Obi... Once again, this impresses me. _
| Isadora Johnson 7/5/05 . chapter 1
awesome! you really captured the power in secrets of the jedi (I loved that book!) You are a great writer! Keep it up! I really liked how your story was after what happened between obi and siri in the room of one thousand fountains, just becuase I kinda wondered what obi wan was feeling after. I know how I would feel: like I wanted to die.
You'rea great writer! Keep up the good work!
| Shannon C. Redfield 6/6/05 . chapter 1
Thank you for your review. It is hard to find people who read this particular book. It's a matter of searching, I think.
Anywho, I think yours was more toned down then mine. Mine was about Obi's heart bleeding and his soul shutting down. Yours...hmm, I just liked it a lot. For mine, because he was so heart-sick, the Force just seemed to not be with him and made him pass out.
But enough about my story-I can get carried away-this review is about yours. I liked it, I enjoyed it, and I hope to see more sometime! _
| Pandora of Ithilien 6/4/05 . chapter 1
how sad. i wish obi and siri hadn't decided to hide their feelings. talk about wasted time. and then she dies...yeah i read secrets of the jedi too. it was heartbreaking.
| Jedi-Keliam-Kenobi 3/1/05 . chapter 1
awesome! i read secrets of the jedi, and this part would fit perfectly in the book! :):)
| JadeAlmasy 3/1/05 . chapter 1
that was good!