this isn't a review so you can delete it if you want. I'm just writing to tell you to continue updating fictions. I think you have lost heart in fanfiction recently and don't want to but it is such a shame because you're a great writer. Please do update something. I will definetely review it. I think you know who i am... (well I hope if not its paulc)

Excellent! The story is interesting and different...it's nice to see a Neverland story that is not based on Peter Pan and some random girl(not that I mind those stories lol) keep up the good work!

A little strange but very good. I liked this chapter a lot but in some parts i think you go into a bit too much detail. It is excellent tho! Keep up the good work and update soon! This story is going on my favourites list.

I plan to update "Initial Reactions" soon and finally finish it!

That was a very good chapter. I like how you wrote it like the main character thought and how its in the present tense. I'm happy to see you returning with a fresh story!

I know of few writers in mainstream - and none in fic - who so identify with the plight of children as you do, Danny. Identify, yes, and, especially, empathise. Nobody else who can render the injustices that children feel so deeply, wandering as they do in the forest of the giants.

This is such a powerful theme; backlit with anger, illuminated with story that demands to be told.

Childhood is a green time; faded into waterlogged history for adults, sun-flickering occasionally in the sainted abyss, rising to the surface once more as the dusk raps on the latch. It is the making place.

Nice. Glad to see someone else around here remembers Fox's PP&tP. I liked your description of the brawl with the indians, for it shows how gory the book makes it out to be, rather than just a little game they play. The lack of space in between the words and hyphens slowed me down a bit though, but it might just be due to me being slow-witted.

Brilliant! I'm positively undone! And the fact that you, in your writings, are able to encompass a wide range of categories and styles in inspirational. That's what I should like to shoot for as well. You colour my world, Danny Barefoot. I tip my hat to you.