For some reason, I thought that the name of that other company, RAGE, was clever and fitting. It stuck out to me xD Other than that, I am amazed by how in-character this is. I usually indulge myself in crack fanfictions and fluffy, out-of-character ones (which is the basis for fanfiction, I guess ._."), but it really is amazing to read one that captures both Seto and Yami so very well. Come to think of it, the whole Yugi gang was also portrayed extremely well, especially Yugi; I found his ability to read others, more specifically Yami, quite realistic xD The funny thing is, I can imagine Yami talking to a fish clearly. It sort of frightens me xD But enough of my rambles...I think I've shown that I enjoyed this story immensely enough xD

Yet another triumph. I love the fish by the way.

O!

Here I am thinking 'yeah!' then you dont write any bits I was sort of wanting to read *giggle giggle*

At least Seto told Yami what Yami needed to tell the crowd.

Woah!

WOAH!

Woah...

*curses* Oh o, Seto is not gonna be happy!

*starts fuming* Kaiba!

Okay. The How dou play bit could come up in later chapters when Yami and Seto are together, and i think Seto might go ballistic privately seeing that commercial.

*swears again* The ads are copying in each other and this won't turn out good.

Wha What?!

I agree with Yami. He is the best for Seto.

Don't worry Yami. Seto noticed you very well. Remember that his eyes hide much of what he is thinking.

Aw! That still makes me laugh and um... as emotional as it did the last time I read it! This is a really brilliant story! Cute Seto and fish-talking, lover Yami! -winks-

Very nicely done!

Very nice intro! I'm sure that I've reviewed this before... but uh... I just checked and haven't TT So I'm doing a re-read and getting every bit into it as I did last time! This is a brilliant story! Witty and funny at all times! And the fish? I love that! XD
Brilliant work!

This story was just too cute. I really enjoyed reading it.

Good communication is the first step! I hope they get together and start to understand each other. Poor Yami amd Seto they are really not good at interactions with other people.

Good chapter, they really are rivals aren't they? I think Yami hates being ignored more than anything.

This is really great. I'm glad I found it.

See, I saw the other goldfish and the first thing I thought was, "Cheese."
But Saltine works much better. :p
Loved this story. Made me giggle, and at the same time, I felt horrible for Yami.
Silly Pharoah, getting in odd situations.

OMG! It's so hot. The whole Crackers and Saltine... LOVE IT! That makes me want to get goldfish again. I can so see Yami talking to a fish ^_^. GOOD JOB!

That was awesome! 100 out of 10! you are on my best friends list! Keep up the excellent work! and write more stories with yami/seto!