I love your story. The feeling you put into it. It made me cry, and that's a good sign from me.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

This is a freaky story! I lurve all the angst and depression. You wrote darkly very well and you bring the emotions out. Lay off rabbit, IIRC, THEY WERE NOT TRANSVESTITES NOR DID THEY RUN AROUND IN SLUTWEAR! Just my humble opinion, sounds like Rabbit needs some physce help, jealous of anime characters, now that is LIKE sad. bubbai, anon

Hey, you may want to tone down the endless angst. Faced with all that depression I'm not surprised they killed themselves.
And IIRC, the Starlights are the transvestite ones, so why would they be referred to as Miss when not scouting around in the slutwear?

Nice fic.