that was good for the most part.

Short, but I liked it.

nice short daikari.

you have no story, your entire fic is way too predictable, your ponctuation is the worst i've ever seen and Kari is way out-of-character. overall this is a shame to all daikari fics.

yay!

short.................but cute

*siren noises* warning, warning, that reaked.yeah reaked.OF AWSOMENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My favorite short,daikari,& ROCKIN'! Daikari reigns SUPREME!!!

Short, yes. Good? No, it's great!

that was short and terribly written. sorry for the truth.

you guys always trying to flame davis. well i'll started flaming Tk!!!!!!!!!!!! He is so gay. unlike davis who is so rad.

it was so good.

YAY!!!! THAT WAS SOO AWESOME!!! DAIKARI FOREVER!! YOU GO DAI!!

awesome story ... i could edit your fics for you before ya post 'em, if ya don't mind ^_^ but, otherwise, cool fic dude!!! way cool beans, man!!! ^_~

That was a little on the short side, but still good. I have two suggestions for you: 1. Have someone check your grammar (you were missing some periods and commas which made it hard to read the story). 2. Add more descriptions of what the characters are thinking. I'm also going to warn you, some people flame Daikari fics like yours simply because it is about that coupling. Don't let those flames get to you. Keep writing on whatever you like. I hope to read more stories from you in the future.

it was ok, a little short, though. Although, ken is davis' one true love ;)