Love it! I like the Homura/Goku pairing but I pity Sanzo in this one. It must really hurt to love someone but not realize it until that person is gone.

Yet another older fic that read, but never reviewed for. Blasphemy I tell you! Anyway...

This fic was increditably sweet and heartwenching. For once it's Sanzo who I pity. Never thought that would happen! And in only fifteen minutes, shit! If you can spout 'em out that fast you should post A LOT more often! I don't think I've found a fic of yours that I don't like! And I'm kinda picky!

Well, good job and GREAT story!

PunkWolf

Wow...that is so deep, so full of emotions...envy...longing...defeat...poor Sanzo, I really feel for that guy...even though he's a tight-ass.

15 mins? O_O I now know that it takes you a very short while to write something very good. Amazing! ^__^

Serves Sanzo right... But still... *weeps*

this was painful, but fabulous, thank you. i have been exploring the different pairings and have found several great stories for Sanzo and Goku, once more thank you for this great angsty story.

Oh... Interesting. Reminds me of a poem I once wrote.
I don't rem how it went but the last line was: "Move now before you lose what you don't own"

nice one. love it. write more, ne?

very very good...

That was really good! I liked that. I doubt I could have written that in an hour, let alone ten minutes, so label me very Impressed and ship me to Arabia. I hope you'll keep writing stuff, because that was great.

... *speechless*

Wow. That... right there... surpasses ANY form of jealousy other writers have attempted to portray. It reads like poetry (not surprising, coming from you, and it fits well with a person like Sanzo).

My favorite part has to be the question about how Goku is a fighter. That whole paragraph there just awed me-- and it made me think. It adds a new level of complication to my other favorite pairing, and it's seriously realistic.

Sanzo's point of view... is perfect. Jealous, annoyed, angry, and even a touch of hurt and a glimmer of defeat. I love it.

I can't praise this enough. Remind me to fangirl to you when we talk later.

~ D-chan