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Reviews For: Void: The Origin of Desire

Mai Naotaki
2005-06-09
ch 1,
abuseThis was very well written. I love how you projected Arima's emotions and thoughts withuot getting him out of character. A chuckle escaped my lips when Asaba told Arima that he loved him, so silly! I love your style of writing and can't wait untl you get the rest up!

~Mai
2lazy2sign in
2005-05-29
ch 1, anon.
abusewait a minute... i dont get it.

wait up... uh okay. i kinda get it.

that was nice. the style or writing was so like arima. very nice
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