dude im gettin realy sick of this anger ** link keeps throwing around. its really getting annoying. this ** doesnt happen in the story. link is supposed to be a real hero. this is bullshitt

“Don’t worry, Malon. As soon as you’re better, I’m getting rid of this façade…”

Does this mean what I think it could mean? The context of Link stepping into the role of Hero of Time long enough until Malon heals, and then says "screw it" all over again? I like the bad-boy Link anyway. It'll be just as cool as when he spat on the master sword.

I had to have read this fic a half dozen times, and it's still good. But I'm disappointed! We're reaching the three year mark, man! Submit something, anything, so long as it can satisfy us for another three years.

There's no one likable in this fic!

AW! I'm an avid Zelinker, but this was really cute!

Even now, some of the Kokiri’s bare chest was protruding from underneath the sheets…not too much, but enough to make a young girl blush.
*Fangirl squeal* Enough to make any girl slightly distracted. XD
Now that he thought about it, he really missed Saria. What was she doing right now? Was she thinking about him? Or had she forgotten about him already? He really wanted to see her again, but until he found the third Spiritual Stone, that was impossible…

“Hey, Fairy Boy,” Malon suddenly uttered. “What are you thinking about?”

“It’s nothing,” Link answered, although he knew it was anything but nothing.

AW!

I am at a loss for words. This has to be by far the best story about Ocarina of Time ever written and read by the eyes of mankind. Do you write proffesionally?

Anyways, I love how Link manages to come to grips with his dark side, though it kind of threw me off when he was made the "bad guy" for a little while there. I certainly hope that he can come into full grips with himself in the future, though I have to admit, that battle between him and Dark-Link was pseudo-legendary!

I'll get back to reading the whole thing eventually. I hope you add more to it! You got me with a cliffhangar at just about every chapter's end...(reminds me about how I write my stories...lol).

-Kerian, very impressed fan-author

 Cute! 

O.O Link reminds me of Anakin Skywalker... a lot!

O.O *Surprise fades away* No! I like Malatite! He's amazing! Link... sadist? I can't picture it alone, but your fic shows even the Dark Side of the Kokiri... (should I tell him yet?)

Link is turning to the Dark Side of the Force! XD Nice job!

Wow! I like how you tell the dodongo's POV and previously, Queen Gohma's POV. That's really cool. I never would have thought of doing that. :D

Wow, this is some amazing writing! I just love your vivid description of basically everything! You had impressed me so much that you left me speechless...

Nice. I like how Link just stood there and it wound up moving Darunia. That was pretty sweet!

Nice job!