 BadGirlgoesworse 2009-12-02 . chapter 29An amasing study of balance between law, morality and personal opinion! And a great story whith and unexpected end! Absolutly love it! |
 Horacrux777 2009-11-24 . chapter 7Damn this is the best confrontation scene i have ever read. please keep up the good work |
 harrypotterspirit 2009-11-22 . chapter 29 I really liked this story. You took your time to think everything through. The repeated misspellings drove me crazy because I had to stop to think about what word you were trying to use which interupted the pace of the chapter. I liked the characterizations of each of the main characters althought I thought Amos was going to play into the ending in a bigger way. Harry turning into a baby was very unexpected even though I knew he was going to survive. At first I didn't like that ending but as Ron hoped Harry would have a chance for a normal like. Now that I think about it Amos does in fact have a huge impact on Harry in the end of this story. The reaction of the wizarding world and other main characters would have been nice. I'll be thinking about this story for some time. Well done. |
 rosesxnxrain's sister 2009-11-19 . chapter 19 don't know about the dragons but did Arthur Pendragon have the sword? |
 jaywolfe 2009-11-18 . chapter 7I love Harry's confrontational speech. Mesmerizing... |
 LetYourHeartFly 2009-11-02 . chapter 7That chapter was some serious stuff ! I love how he spoke in this chapter, smooth and deep ! Good job ! |
 onethos 2009-10-30 . chapter 29OMFG awesome. I love it |
 Lily887787 2009-10-28 . chapter 29what just happen? |
 1withthepotionsseveroussnape 2009-10-28 . chapter 16 oh someones angwy. sorry, halloweens in three days and i am going to be belatrix. anyway, this fic is brilliant! |
 1withthepotionsseveroussnape 2009-10-27 . chapter 12 like the fic! sounds a bit like something i have been trying to write even though i don't have account for any type of ff website. anyway back to reading. bye! |
 Sweetdoggie 2009-10-22 . chapter 29This was an excellent story, the plotting was great and the storyline was fantastic. The only thing that really marred it for me was your constant word mis-use. Where/were/we're, then/than, Neocrammer/Necromancer and other words that were close to being correct, but, well, just weren't. I'm guessing that you aren't a reader, or if you do read, it's just fanfic where these errors are perpetuated. I mention this because a lot of the words that were wrong--shutter for shudder, etc., are written as you probably say them, not as they are spelled. As I said, this was a very entertaining story except for the word errors that made me give a little scream every time I read them. |
 jonayla 2009-10-13 . chapter 29Great story! really exiting and all. I defenitly didn't expected that end, but it fited the story well!
love,
Jo |
 layania 2009-10-03 . chapter 29Finished the story. I have to say, I was impressed. You managed to make it into the perfect balance of Abused/SuperPowered/Heir-of-Hogwarts/etc Harry without ruining it. I loved the story. Brilliant! |
 layania 2009-10-03 . chapter 15I see you threatened to unleash your wrath if I didnt review for this particular chapter. Honestly though its brilliant, addicting. I know you finished the story two years ago but i keep taking breaks so that the story lasts longer. I love it. And I love your version of Harry. He's brilliant. |
 TutelaTwin 2009-10-03 . chapter 29great story, very well written, but i didn't like the ending. i especially have a bit of a soft spot for draco, so i really didn't like ron just killing him like that. other than that, the battle between the heirs was disappointing in the sense that there was almost no information on what happened once it really got started.
you've managed to surprise me several times during the course of the story. i must say, i honestly thought that the solution would be for harry to have amos turn him as soon as the deed was done so that he would die, but it wouldn't be permanent.
overall, very good. i enjoyed reading this story very much. |