Eagle's finally made some friends, his parents must be relieved. I can't wait to read about Lantis' arrival.

i love this story. its totally awesome i feel for eagle's past, it somewhat relates to me in a way. but i guess not everyone can have a nice past with the perfect future, but its the past that makes us who we are. i love that moral that is just so clear in your story. do continue soon.

...it breaks my heart to know how this will end. (especially since u put it in the first chapter. -sigh-)

Your story is captivating. When are you going to finish it? There just aren't enough stories featuring Eagle Vision, but just one question, why are many of your characters named after cars?

So... You are going to finish this, right? Because, you know, I've been waiting for a long time and I'm getting a little impatient...

I really enjoyed this fic. Eagle as an outcast works surprisingly well. I've always pictured him as someone who always had a lot of people around him, but rarely got attached to any of them, but oddly, I think I prefer your version. Out of curiosity, are you still going to be doing interludes at all? Or, well, actually what I'm wondering is what you're doing about the storyline you started in the first chapter. And I think I completely lost whatever point I was originally going to make. Sorry.

Your style of writing really outdoes a lot of the writing on this site, and the details that you work into your writing add a lot to the story.
Please keep updating. This is one of the best stories on this site that I've read.

Que! That was really good! I was screaming in exitement all chapter long reading my fav. character's childhhod. I really enjoyed it..

Since, "It is extremely helpful to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved," and, "A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer," I shall take this opportunity to comment on an "aspect" of your story instead of raving like an idiot:

The aspect that I choose is your overall style; it's interesting, to say the least. Actually, I went back and reread "Lying, Waiting, All Too Late," and I understand why I recognized "Crash and Burn" as yours without even referring to the penname--you have a very distinct style. It's good, too, but it can probably be better. Maybe you could try mimicking other authors' styles (real authors--don't you dare write like other fanfiction authors), and just play around with it. Anyway, just a suggestion on my part; I personally think this story's fine as it is, and I mention this for lack of a better subject.

Anyway, keep up the good work. It's probably better that you didn't interrupt the story with the interlude, since the last chapter's end wasn't defined enough for such a thing. Keep up the good work, and keep updating!

This story needs more reviewers. Silly people only wanting to read about the girls... I find that some of the most creative and interesting MKR fics really are the ones that spotlight the characters from the other countries.

I love how you've written the schooling system. I never really thought of Eagle as someone who be an outcast but here it is and it works wonderfully.

Zazu's always a character that fades away in the background seeing as few hardly do much to build on his character but I think I might have to reconsider my opinion of him. ^_^ Makes me really sad now when I look back at the prologue. (I'm ashamed I didn't care before!)

Where's Geo? He need's to work his way into the story ASAP. Hope to see a new chapter soon. Thanks for the read.

Oh my god! This is really cool! I don't know where you get your idea, but they're really cool. I've been searching for a ficcie like this for a long time. I'm gonna put this on my fav. stories list!

Aww, that chapter was sweet. It'll be sad when we get angst again...

As always, good chapter. I still can't wait for Geo and Lantis to come in. And I still can't believe I'm the only one reviewing this.

I don't have anything very original to say, so I won't say much. I fear becoming a raving ff . net creepy fangirl, so I'll hold back. Just, this quick update really made my day. My headache's practically gone now! So, keep it up!

Let's see, what to say...

I think your best talent at writing is characterization; you are really good at making these characters seem like real people. Thus said, I can't wait until some of the familiar characters from MKR finally enter your story (like, oh, let's say Geo and Lantis).

The original characters were, however, a tad bit confusing. Right now I'm trying to think of who this redhead is, and I'll probably end up going back to the last chapter again. Nonetheless, this confusion rather added to the mood of the chapter, since Eagle didn't seem to have a strong hold on his life at the moment.

All said and read, I enjoyed this chapter as well. I really like authors that update frequently, so currently you are looking good.

Also, thank you for the email; it makes me feel good to get things like that (well-liked, you know, like I actually have friends). Comparing "Crash and Burn" with "Lying, Waiting, All Too Late," I do have to say that I agree--"Crash and Burn" is turning out to be better. So, you'd better continue. I'll be waiting.

That's cool... You know, I stopped reading Rayearth fanfiction a long time ago, mostly because most of it consisted of one of two plots--either Fuu and Ferio are in love, or the Magic Knights' daughters (although, occasionally it's the author and her friends) come to Cephiro to save it. Heart, heart, lol !1!!1!1

Thus said, this first day that I actually returned to the Rayearth section after about two years of absence and found on the first page a story centering on Eagle (which, probably because these types of fics are usual high-level, are sparse in this here category), I found myself really excited. It restored my hope for Rayearth fanfiction! (Of course, looking back now, I realize that this assumption was not at all correct--oh well).

Anyway, reading your fic, I was noticing how talented you are at English--as opposed to the usual 3rd Grade level of writing commonly found here. Rather pleasantly amused, I read on uninterrupted until the name "Meson" really caught my attention--in fact, your writing is so memorable that I was actually able to recall this name from your other Autozam story--"Lying, Waiting, All Too Late" (I think that's what it's called--aww, you probably know which one I'm talking about). Checking to confirm that you were actually the author I was thinking of (since I hadn't even looked at the penname when I first started reading today), I also remembered how much I admire you as one of the few gifted writers in the Rayearth section. Also one that does not get much credit for such gifted writing (I noticed currently, excluding this one, this story has a total of zero reviews, which only serves to reflect the shamefully low standards of the readers here).

Anyway, long story short, you are a brilliant writer. I do hope you continue to update this fic, even though, apparently, the feedback seems to be lacking. I loved your "Lying, Waiting, All Too Late" story and continue to hope that you update that one too, but I'm very interested nonetheless and hope to read more.