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Chromde
2008-03-13
ch 1,
abuseThat was so sweet, I love how they were taking on after Naruto. That is just, too amazing for words.
perfidiouspink
2008-02-17
ch 1,
abuseThat was so heart wrenchingly wonderful and touching.
Thank you for such a well written and touching story! I like all of the parts in this arc by the way. Well done.
joni.doesnt.know
2007-07-22
ch 1,
abuseEven /I/ almost cried. That was just... so... CUTE.
I loved it, so very, very, much.
iggywaffle
2007-05-14
ch 1,
abuseNot only is there a lack of good NejiNaru in the world, but there's also a lack of fics who can hold their own without making a spectacle out of said romance -- but you wrote this perfectly. Naruto's reaction was perfect, and the little underlying displays of affection were enough to make Neji and Naruto's relationship seem real. You chose quite possibly the single, most perfect gift Naruto could have ever recieved, and reading about it was like-- ... Actually, no. I'm not going to sacrifice my pride by saying that I got teary. :P

But... and... I'm going to stop pretending to be coherent, because oh my god, that was the cutest and most heart wrenching thing EVER and they tattooed their goddamn cheeks and... ohmygod.

This is going in my favorites. :3 I'll be happy to look back and read this on a rainy day when I need some cheering up.
shishikijo
2007-04-25
ch 1, anon.
abuse. . . i have but one thing to say . . . KA.WA.II.
joyceeee
2007-03-14
ch 1,
abuseWhat? 5 measly reviews? You deserve so much more, after writing this amazing fic! It very nearly made me cry, you know. I have seen fics where Naruto rescues and raises abandoned before, but they were mostly done from naruto's POV.. I adore the pride, respect and love the children have for Naruto, and of course, the slight NejiNaru too. Favouriting!
Vampire Queen
2006-06-11
ch 1,
abuseAW! So cute!
Yuki Kokoro
2006-06-06
ch 1,
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You stun me. And rob me of sensical words. The children are *perfect* and Naruto's reaction to them is just... beautiful. The way even after all this time he doubts how much others care for him, the overwhelming love he would have for a family like this, how much this would mean to him...

The tension and emotional breakdown when he realizes what they've done... THIS LINE: "He had taken these children as his own. They were taking him as their own, and suddenly his accidental, successful little attempt at a family felt as though it was rooted deeper than he had ever known." *sniffles happily* It's all so happy...

I often rebel against the sudden introduction of original characters but... just wow. I usually don't have this much trouble explaining why I liked a fic, but... I just really love the universe you've built here and how you portray the characterse in it. And your writing style, can't forget about that.
lorelei2876
2005-09-17
ch 1,
abuseUtterly heartwrenching, deeply touching. The emotion behind this is so true, it made me ache a little when I finished the story. Sure, Naruto isn't real per se, but it's hard not to get emotionally invested in a non-living character when a story is as well written as this.
esther
2005-03-03
ch 1, anon.
abusethat's gotta be the most beautiful and satisfying future one shot including so many OCs that i've ever read.

you brought a lump to my throat with naruto's reaction to the kids' tattoos.

absolutely lovely. thankyou.
-NC-
2005-03-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseXD This was very well written. Yeah, it crams a lot into a short span, but it didn't detract from it not at all. Keep it up!
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