Finally a story of yours I can read all the way jk XD Violent but I still think Rin and Vergil and adorable. Just wish Dante would notice me *cough cough*

Ah, so nice. A great job of emphasizing his feelings for Rin without going against his obvious avoidance of public displays of affection.

I love your story. So much I nominated it for Category: Best Original Character (Yume)
for the 3rd quarter Inu fan guild awards. Good Luck!

PS This story calls for a sequel :D.

What an ending... it was so sweet...
I hope I can read more of your stuff soon, and good luck on your future works!
I don't have much else to say, so 'till next time you write... ^^

>< KYAH! Did it have to end so soon? ^^ I love this story, it's very original and interesting. I swear it was hard prying my eyes from the screen as I read it. It's Great!

Ick I hate Kikyo thats why i killed her in my story anyways i love the story please update soon! till then bai bai
>Bunnie

Dude i think your story rules! You would probably get more reviews if you allowed non-signed reviews but thats your choice. Anyways i really like your story so far you should update as soon as possible.

Wow! I was surprised with the smart plot to actually use Rin instead to get the Shikon shards. That concept was interesting. I hope you update soon, because I'll be reading!

well since you read mine i'll read yours and i think that first chap is go so far and it mare than likly is good so i'll keep reading but it is good

*dun`dun`dun* and so it begins, I cant belive you dont have any reviews on this story! I hope rin will be okay! I wonder what sesshomarus worst nightmare will be...I cant wait, im going to read the othe 7 chapters and review okays!! Ja