This is a wonderful story! It's compelling, and in character, and very appropriately creepy. And that second-to-last chapter had me on the edge of my seat. The ending is just sweet. And now... I'm off to see what else you wrote. Great job!

Absolutely marvelous!

I absolutely adore your stories. Well, the Star Trek ones- I'm not familiar with the other series you write for (: I must've read each of your ST:TOS pieces at least a half a dozen times apiece...

I'm sure that you've moved on, seeing as it's been nearly four years since you've written for Star Trek [or at least posted for it], but in case the reason for the absence of sequels/subsequent chapters is simply a perceived lack of interest in your audience, I'd like to point out that I, at least, anxiously await the day you decide to write more Things that Never Happened, or the third part of your bondmates series...

Well, whether you pick your older series back up or not, I'm sure I'll keep coming back and reading what you have posted until I grow tired of them [and I've been reading these stories multiple times over the course of three years or so, so I don't foresee myself losing interest in them anytime soon (: ].

Same compliments (more or less) as in other reviews I have given you: Excellent characterization, plot, story development, Character interaction, etc. ... I could go on. Probably.

The creation of the 'villain' was great, too. While I don't exactly agree with her ideas about love or her reasons, (which is a good thing!) I understand the fact that she was doing the best she knew how within the constraints of warped mental processes. Poor girl.

I wonder what's next for the most recent of my favorite couples? If you write more... well, you'll be on my favorites list if you do! Author Alert list, I mean. Well, both, actually.

I love your writing style, too. Clear, sharp when it needs to be, and all that creating changing moods and stuff like that. As a part of that, you include humor well without taking from the attention of the story. That's awesome, and makes the story more interesting, adds a little bit of fun, and is used in a way that makes the characters seem more themselves.

Thank you for writing this. I enjoyed it immensely.

Just found your story and I must say this is one of the best I've ever read. I really like how it all evolved from "Impromptu Bondmates" (which, BTW, also is great). The characterisation is very good, the plot and the mystery - brilliant (and one should always treasure a well-written mystery). I liked your style - it, sort of, flows naturally and the whole thing really captures one's attention; a very enjoyable read, indeed.
I hope you'll continue the series. You should, you know.

cheers
AA

I really, really loved it and I am so looking forward to a sequel! ^_^

I loved this. It was a great fic.

Aw, bless 'em.

I must say, this was a really gripping and compelling story and easily one of my favourite Spock McCoy ones (How morbid is that) I like how you've done a sort of sequal to impromtu Bondmates. That was a really good fic too.

Lol, I don't think Spock could elegantly propose if he tried. But that's what's so darn cute about him. XD
Anyway, good fic. It was enjoyed thoroughly.

Tricky, tricky. Should've seen that you would have introduced the killer at an earlier point. Oh well. Good chap.

When the woman first showed up, I thought it was Chapel but then figured out it wasn't. Should've seen that she would get taken though.

I loved that line "In my spleen, Jim. How the hell can I locate Spock if I thought he was in my spleen?" Lol.

Wow, yeah. This girl is indeed creepy, so rational and sane.
I liked that talk Spock had with his inner self thing though. Good touch.
This chapter was profoundly deep. You wrote it all so well though that it didn't come out corny as deep things sometimes do. Good job.

Oh, god, no! McCoy! ((cries)) What happened? Is McCoy gonna die? Not cool!

And the plot thickens! Lol, if it is Spock, they're all so screwed. XD There's no stopping that Vulcan.