real interested in missing chapter two, this story has truly been a joy to read.
take care and keep writing.

sandra

Hey!! Happy New Year!
Is great to finally read the last two chapters.
Love the interaction between the two women. Barbara should know by now how Helena loves her.

keep the good work!!
Can't wait to read another story from you.

for the love of the Gods, woman! Don't stop there! God, u drag ppl in, hold em there, engulf them inside ur world, then u leave em hanging!! ur evil, pure evil!

j/k about the evil part, but i'm damn sure not joking about u being a literary genius. plz, plz post more soon!! feed the junkies you've created!!

read the latest chapters, the front page shows story complete; but are there more chapters to come? Hope so.

take care

Very interesting story. I'm very impressed. Good work.

Barbara and Helena look cute together.

I would love to see the reaction of Dinah when they told her they are together.

Keep the good work.
Can't wait to see what happens next.

thanks for the update...

look forward to the ending.

sandra

Great chapter!

Can't wait to read how Dinah will react about Helena and Barbara as a couple.

Keep the good work.

Hi,

You have handled this story line very well and kept it interesting and a little secretive...Keeps us checking for updates.

Awesome chapter!
At last Barbara is confesing her love for Helena. Can't wait to read what Dinah would say about Helena and Barbara's confession to each other.

good installment, nice to see "Barbara" back among the living.

look forward to the rest.

sandra

Good chapter!
Can't wait to see what happens next with Helena and Barbara.

Nice to see Bruce getting with the program. This chapter explained alot. So he is leaving before Barbara gets out of the hospital...interesting. Looking forward to more..

Wow!
What an amazing chapter. The best one i've read.
Now Bruce realize that he can't separate a family. They're love for each other is to strong.

Again, amazing job!

just checked in and found some new chapters. Just keeps getting more interesting. Did not even see the way this chapter went. Great twist.
and can we say More please?