|Reviews for When Doves Cry|
| ChadesShadow 5/1/05 . chapter 2
this is such a sad sad story!and a very well written one too but soo sad! anyways (shoves emotions in the bin) continue, it's a good plot
| Raye-Raye 5/1/05 . chapter 2
Dark you bad boy.I like the direction your story is going. 0_ Are krad and Satoshi going to get together?
| schizo and proud 4/30/05 . chapter 2
Oh the joy of an angst fic! Wait... What? Never mind. I like the fic. It interests me to no end, though a lot of things interest em to no end, but rarely writing... So good job! Cheers!
| Guest 4/30/05 . chapter 2
Hey great story so far. It really has my attention and it's well written...er wait typed. Um...right well please go on. :)
| Classy Raven 4/23/05 . chapter 1
I think Satoshi should go after his husband, their such a good pair,
Marriage counsuling, should be funny
Dark as Satoshi counsler
Krad as Daisuke consuler should be really good, Dark as supunk purple haired theif who doubles as a consuler,
Krad, wel, d psyco who double as a consuler, finds Daiuske amusing,
put it together,
Satoshi, as known as a cop, Arrests Krad, for hitting on his husband,
| VazeStream 4/13/05 . chapter 1
wow...been a long time since i've read some true angst! keep on!
| kingmaker 4/1/05 . chapter 1
Good angst; yeah there's a LOT of SatoshiDaisuke thanks for balancing it out!
| Classy Raven 3/24/05 . chapter 1
all rigt I have an Idea for the next chappie if you so choose to make a seqweal which would be really good,and aprrehiated for all of your readers you have something
okay you said Daiuske left but didn't sign for a devorice in either way both males would have to sign but would if satoshi didn't wont to sign and refused.
Dark is back, and comferts Daiuske (has own body)
Seeing the bruises satoshi Inflected on them.
Krad tempts Satoshi.
Satoshi becomes obessed with getting daiuske bnck
you take it from there-
if you wont you may use my Idea's just update it or make a seqwal do something please do NOT disconitue it its really good
If you need to talk just email me-
I'm here all day
just DO SOMETHING_
| Classy Raven 3/12/05 . chapter 1
update it make satoshi go after his husband, how about Dark comes back, with a seprate body, and maybe tries to comfart his former tamer while satoshi tries to get dai back he well do anything to get him back, even if it means to kill dark.
A sugustion if you find it amusing you can play with it you have my permission to use it just do me one little favor though updat it please?
| Les Scribbles 3/3/05 . chapter 1
... Owwyy... *sniffles* ... please, pass me the tissues... I'd really appreciate... *grabs one* Thanks *sniffle*