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| TaeKwonDobabe74 2008-03-28 ch 11, | abusethat was great ! totally funny and super suprising ! |
| heartagram 2006-08-01 ch 11, anon. | abusethat was absolutely hillarious |
| Future Miss CSI60 2006-07-30 ch 3, | abuse*GASP* BUM BUM BUM! And it continues... (seiously, what mysteriosu force made you feel compelled to create such a...UNIQUE story?) |
| Future Miss CSI60 2006-07-30 ch 2, | abuseOH GOD! the other possible father is ECKLIE isn't it!? DAMN! there are some ** in the CSI LAB! |
| Future Miss CSI60 2006-07-30 ch 1, | abuseLOL! Okay, now this is said with the greatest amoutn of respect...but what the Hell is wrong with you!? XDXDXDXDXDXD!! :):):):):) That was just TOO funny! |
| just lurking 2006-07-30 ch 11, | abuseThat was to much!! so funny! how much research did you do for this fic? huh? heehee! |
| bauerfreak 2006-05-15 ch 2, | abuseOh my lord. I just started reading this, and it's hilarious!! It's so soapy, it's practically suds. I love how Catherine "pleasured" Ecklie to keep him quiet, and how Sara is working her thing with Nick. Ha!! I'll read the rest of this later. Awesome work! |
| Tabula-rasa33 2006-05-06 ch 11, | abusewow. if you would have killed nick and sara, i would have had to kill you. {haha} however, thank you for killing ecklie.. he deserved to die a painful death. |
| csiforever2005 2005-11-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseHilarious! Great "soap" layou. |
| rojaji 2005-08-04 ch 1, | abuseSo many things about this story to love... - Grissom getting hit by a bug - Snickers! - Only killing off someone I DON'T like - ok, I'm tired of listing stuff already. It's 100 degrees out, I'm sitting in shorts in a leather chair and this dang story was so funny it's kept me stuck in said leather chair for the past half hour. Thanks for making me laugh, I love the parodies! Oh, and Nick and Sara were so cute, and Catherine so scheming! Ok, really, I'm going now. Bye! |
| Kim 2005-07-10 ch 11, anon. | abuseVery clever writing. I loved how you didn't have to go obvious to be funny. You blended a good amount of parody with a serious nature that made it funny and charming. Cute but not too serious. I liked it a lot. Especially how you changed to scene every time something new occurred and how you recapped the end of the last chapter at the beginning of each subsequent one... very soap-like. |
| PinkSander 2005-04-13 ch 8, | abuseOh what tangled webs you weave |
| PinkSander 2005-04-13 ch 4, | abuseOk Mia in all reality does not have to steal Warrick from Cath, They 'Warrick,sophia/lady Heather,Grissom,Cath and Ecklie' Can all swap partners! the only two who are being faithful to one another is Nick and Sara, oh and Greggo. |
| PinkSander 2005-04-13 ch 3, | abuseOMFG! what the hell planet did you fall off of? This is so like a soap opera! Drama up the wazoo! and poor Griss! but Mia was right it is ironic that he got hit by a VW Beetle! One question tho is Greggo gonna get any? I mean everyone of the has been turned in too ** Puppies, with an exception of Greg. |
| Wiccamage 2005-03-29 ch 11, | abuseHere, Here! We had this same conversation at my mailing list fansite too. I think this would be a fun plot for the actual show too. I know that's a little far-fetched, but this was rather enjoyable. Well, what am I saying, all of your stories are enjoyable. Wiccamage |