Wtf. I am absolutely in love with this story.

I can't believe it isn't more popular; it's one of the best FMA fic I've read in AGES, and the idea is so original. I love this.

Of course, I'm going to fav it and recommend it to everyone I know. Cause its SO GOOD.

I did take a long time to review, because as you suggested, I read the beginning again. And I love the changes! Of course, I suggested some. Thank you for considering my opinion enough to change your story! It gaves me motivation to keep writing constructive reviews (I have already been flamed for this).

For this chapter : I love it! Good ending for a good story!

Just two points : if Elysia doesn't even remember the real Hughes, why did she try to resurrect him? Only for her mother? Something as desperate seems only being made for love, in my opinion...

And : I want a longer epilogue! What happens in it is very interesting! I have said you a few times that I wanted more Elysia development, and the part about her meeting Wrath, her never forgiving Ed, could have been very more interesting with more details! (And no, I won't ask for more development of the hot lesbian sex. It just doesn't fit with the fic, even if I could like it in another one :) )

Cool^_^

I did think that was a strange way to officially end it, it left so many things in the air. I like the little 'epiloge' paragraph at the bottom though. That was so funny!! Especially the "Sheizka and Winry go home and have hot lesbian smex" XD Alicia and Wrath was never a pairing I thought I'd see.

But that was a nice dramatic twist, Ed killed Sin and Alicia never forgave him. I did think there would be more Wrath in it though...

I hope that you would continue this fanfiction! I love it! I'm thinking about drawing a scene from one of the chapters. Can't wait for chapter ten! ^^

I love this story. i just watched episode 25 and i was upset about hughes dying. i like how you brought him back even though he is a homunculus he is one of my most favorite charachers in fma.

Still interesting, even if I think always the same : it's sad to see Ed so cold with Ed and so close to Roy at the same time. It shouldn't happen like this. Roy angst is good, and when it is naturally incorpored in a real story, it's even better!

It's horrible! Poor Al! Ed has been so cold to him!

I like the little family scenes with Gracia, Sin and Alicia, but Alicia is very calm, and maybe not mature enough, for someone who has practiced human transmutation, has been on the other side of the gate, and probably, if she knows so much alchemy, knows what happened and who is exactly the person in front of her. But here... in some of her sentences, I had almost the impression of seeing the four-year-old Alicia! I think she deserves more character development after what happened to her...

I really, really want to know what happens next!

This might sound kind of pathetic but I cried... v_v
That's what you get when you listen to Tobira no Mukou e (the most recent ending). T_T

Wow...really good^_^

OH MY GOSH! OH MY GOSH! AH! I LOVE YOU! well, not that way, but yah... im so well, happy that someone would be so er... wonderfully nice as to make a fic where even if it wasnt Maes, he returns anyway! hes my fave character, and you have brought him back to me! thank you so much!

I still love it! Thank you for the message!

I would have loved more insistance of the first meeting between Ed and Al with so long... and I'm sad Wrath won't be here again. I knew he wasn't Hughes' son, he just wanted a family... He's unpredictable, but still, I can't think he won't try to see Sin again... Even if he won't appear again, please, find a good reason!

And you so don't suck! :-) I'm just critic because I always am.

A very nice fic...and Ed is back ^O^
But what happened to Wrath? poor little child...

Huh?...Aw cool!^_^...What happened to Wrath?^_^

Oh my god, I love this story so much!

Did I mention that there are no more the writing style problems which bothered me at the beginning of the fic? But I'm afraid they prevent people from reading this fic. They don't know what they lose.

Did Ed come back by the gate when Alicia opened it? It would be logical... even if it's just a door to what is in between, usually, not to our world...

How old is he? I guess we will know when the next chapter arrives...

I'm waiting for it!