Reviews for Chosen Destiny

Reviews For: Chosen Destiny

The Lightning Flash 2007-03-12 ch 8,	abuseNyah! Thank you! rolls around happily Finally! :D Don't make me wait another year to see some more! Please! This was really good. Really really good. The tongue transplant is kinda creepy, but I'm assuming you have a reason. And it's fun watching Sparx fight against it. ^^ Why was Kellamy's fighting off in that duel? Still drunk? Or some other reason? Hmm. Of course your writing has improved! But there's not a chapter of this fic that I don't like (possibly because it started with Kellamy in chains? :P ) I want to give this fic the kind of well thought out, impressive review it deserves, but I just can't. It makes me get all squeeful and happy, and then I'm utterly useless. Just write more. :P
Scarabbug 2005-09-18 ch 7,	abuseAt last! A new chapter (glomphs). You already know how good your writing is and that I love Vincenza's character so I'll spare you the repetition, but all the same squee! Good chapter. Unusual approach to the situation, that. I found Tim's reaction to the crashed cart VERY reminiscent of Sparx. You seem to have grasped the ideals and natures of each character and inorporated them into characters which are technically in fact, supposed to be the opposite. Not easy to do that. More canon characters would have been nice, as much as I dig your OC's - my fave chapters were the first two because they involved canon characters which I'd be curious to see reacting in this kind of situation. But hey, whatever floats your boat. ^_^
The Lightning Flash 2005-09-17 ch 7,	abuseFINALLY! :D I was about to re-read all this just to get a fix! If things are all switched around in this world, wouldn't the Dark Elves be peaceful and the Light Elves fans of the Dark Arts? Don't leave the next chap so long, you're killing me! :P
The Lightning Flash 2005-06-21 ch 6,	abuseBeautiful, darling. I adore it, truly I do. Sometimes I wish I could be 100% Fangirl, just so I could babble on. About Kellamy, naturally. :P Anyway, looking forward to discovering the plan.
Scarabbug 2005-06-21 ch 6,	abuseyay you updated! I've been looking forwards to this. I am growing incresingly fond of Vincenza as a character, for some reason. I like the way she stands out. Loved the chase and there are generally a great deal of original ideas flickering back and forth here. I'm rather interested in the gravity defying rollercoaster idea... and you're very ic. I always saw Sparx as 19, myself, but well, that hardly makes a difference. The interpretation of Sparx has changed slightly. It now seems to be more a case of Destiny "chose" her because she was the most convenient option (third best) rather than anything sueish. Quite a relief, that. Brilliant chapter. Please continue.
The Lightning Flash 2005-04-22 ch 5,	abuseOh, a plug. :P I have this huge grin plastered on my face right now, I get it every time you update this. You know I love this, but that's all I can think of to say, so I'll just go re-read. :)
CheleLiz 2005-04-13 ch 4,	abuseNot a bad idea - alternate dimensions. You have an uncanny knack for taking strange things and writing really good stories... keep doing it!
Scarabbug 2005-03-24 ch 1,	abuseSorry it took me so long to review this one. Server trouble and the computer wouldn’t let me post reviews. Can I just say wow? This has gotta be one of your best stories yet. The alternative dimension idea is extremely unique and a fantastic, different take on Lightning Knights (and I’m really glad this is Sparx-Centred :D) The Googler-death scene seriously haunted me. I was picturing it in my head and it totally creeped me out. Very well done. Keep writing this one. I can’t wait to see the next bit.
The Lightning Flash 2005-03-21 ch 4,	abuseAh, but it’s USEFULL! That gives him one up on Ace’s fringy bits. :D - “You’ll find a way to convinced me, I sure,” the young woman leaned back on the bed and gave the end of his braid a final tug. The hair quickly unravelled, and there was a sharp tinkle as several monkey keys fell to the cold tile floor. “I’m glad to hear that,” Kellamy shook his head, unravelling his hair still further, and a set of wrenches tumbled out, followed by a bowling ball. “You have a good . . . tongue,” the young woman pulled him towards her, ignoring the clatter that several tins of food made as they hit the tiles. “Ah, you noticed. And I thought you were playing hard-to-get.” Kellamy tossed his head elaborately, freeing a pair of shoes and a walking stick. “Me? Be difficult?” she ran her fingers through his hair, and the thud of twelve volumes of the Encyclopaedia Britannica hitting the floor caused her to jump slightly. “Did I say difficult?” Kellamy asked innocently, but the young woman simply quirked her eyebrow at the growing pile on the floor. “Good equipment,” Kellamy informed her, pressing her into the pillows as a slinky sprung free. - Ah, my reviews, always so very helpful! :P
The Lightning Flash 2005-03-05 ch 3,	abuseAnd Destiny is right, of course. :P Why DOES Kellamy keep his hair so long? Apart from it being purty? (Loved the fairy thing :D) Poor Chaos, but I suppose she still has both her legs . . .? She and Random together would nearly make one complete person. :) Very Nice, but what about Ace and Random? They never win without Sparx.
hyperpsychomaniac 2005-03-03 ch 2,	abuseO Yay! This is really really good. Yay for all the alternates, who are very cool! Please post more, this is really interesting.
The Lightning Flash 2005-03-03 ch 2,	abuseWow! Cool! Love it! Love the charas, love the 'Verse, love Kellamy! Why is Sparx special? (Why did you take So Long to realise? :P) Okay, you're NEARLY competing with the hat . . .
The Lightning Flash 2005-03-03 ch 1,	abuseThis is my bestest birthday present ever! (after my hat, anyway. :P) Kellamy! Sparx! Kellamy/Sparx! YAY! Poor Kellamy, how DOES he get himself into these situations? And yet she wouldn't have it any other way. :D Man, if it weren't for my dislike of slash, and fear of giving you Ideas, I could kiss you right now! :P

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