This was a really interesting take on Tsuzuki's past. I love all the little details you included. ^^

--E.A.

*grumbles silently*

This story is really good.

In fact, it's so good that I think you should add a sequel!

(Hint hint, nudge nudge)

You should be really proud of this piece. I love everything about this fic. I really like how you described Hisoka's thoughts as he goes through Tsuzuki's closet. Great job on this fic.

... kinda sweet, kinda sad, and it kinda leaves me wanting more... Are you planning on doing a second chapter, 'cause I think you should!

Amazing! I love this story, you portray Tsuzuki and Hisoka so beautifully and in character. Great job! I do hope that you'll write a sequal...

Thanks for a great read!!

it was interesting...maybe you could write a sequel to this where they finally talk bout the pic...either way it was very interesting...:>

That was incredible! Honestly speaking. I read a few other of your YnM pieces and they've all been great. I love th eway you can give so much life and detail and such deep, heartfelt storylines!

It's just very amazing. Yeah, i do notice several grammatical mistakes but it hasn't been a hindrance. Still understandable. Keep writing k?! Email me please if you ever do write more.

Hihi^^... Hmm I don't think this story is that confusing. I actually got really into it and loved it.The way you've explain them are really good even if english is not you're first language^^. You're really poetic and artistic. It's a lovely fic and I think not many peeps would have though up something like this^^.

The peom you've picked should add more credit for ya.^^ So even if it's not a promise. I hope you'll write a sequal on your free time^^. Hope to see ya soon^^

Enjoyed it immensely!

This is actually a favorite story BECAUSE you leave the reader in suspense. Are there any plans to do a sequel of sorts? Something where Tsuzuki explains some of the pictures. Either because he wants to or because he "has no choice".

Hallu~! ^-^

Nice fic, Yay! It was so sweet!

And Touda is in it! XD I want so badly that photo where he and Tsuzuki are sleeping

Candy´s perv side: OMG! THEY SLEPT TOGETHER!

XD Ah, excuse me, It´s just that I eat wa~y too much sugar, just like Tsuzuki!

It's really good. I liked it! Please write more. Update soon! ^-^

Wow, this is awsome. I haven't read one that is so close to the characters and the way the story is going. You have got it in you! Fantastic fic. I hope you write a sequal or something more, haha. I really enjoy reading it!

Well, to start off, I have a few spelling mistakes to correct: "Hisoka happened to end in Tsuzuki's house while the man was ordering it" -- "ordering" should be changed to "organize." (In that context, "ordering" means "to order in", as if Tsuzuki was buying a new closet.) Also, with the sentance, "And then there was the photo that should never be touched or sawn" -- "sawn" should be "seen." Sawn is not a word.

But! Those few errors aside, I thought this story was magnificent. The writing was lovely and I *adore* the idea of Hisoka helping Tsuzuki out with household chores. It's also great to see a fanfic where Tsuzuki's past is highlighted, because it's only hinted at in the show, really, despite Tsuzuki's immense guilt trips. This was a lovely story: very calm and sad and sweet, and I really enjoyed it!

"don't grumble silently" lol. that actually made me review, you know? =P
i liked this story quite a lot. i would be curious to read a seuel if you ever decided upon it, although it's great if you leave it as is. great work =)