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| RedBrunja 2008-06-09 ch 1,  | abuseOh, delightful. I love that Kakashi DOES kill him - that's part of what makes it so perfect. |
| Vampire Sasu-chan 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abuseAwesome! Hope you continue! Please? ^-^ ~Mizu |
| DragonCrazed 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseOne word - Wow. This goes in my Honorable Mention section in my profile! |
| causeiambetta 2007-03-06 ch 1, | abuseExpertly written, very fun to read. too bad sasuke is now an uber-god in the manga. |
| afitre 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abuseO...nice. |
| kusuri 2006-04-25 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this fic! But I don't like the end.Why does Sasuke have to die... |
| Austin Mcginnis 2006-04-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseNICE do a second 1 that tottaly awsome |
| LuoLiBei 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseGah, how depressing. :) Wait, I don't think a smiley face is supposed to go with that statement. Fanfic twists the emotional responses after awhile. :) I'm glad you didn't have a deathfic warning. The story wouldn't've had the same impact. I kind of feel in shock, like wait, they're supposed to fix Sasuke, not kill him! Eek, thinking about it is making me feel yucky, I preferred the empty shock to this sick stomach feeling. :( I am curious about what Kakashi is right about, I'm guessing when Sasuke left or sometime during his training there was something about not needing to look further than the village for power or maybe something about killing Itachi not fixing things or that Sasuke was going to become his brother or maybe something else entirely, I'm not too far along in the show/manga. So is there something specific Kakashi is right about or are you just being mysterious? :) I think this is a believeable future for Sasuke, and anime/manga/asian movies seem to love killing people off when American things would have a happier ending. Man, fanfic isn't supposed to make sad endings, it's supposed to fix the mistakes of the writers! I just don't want to even think about your story. :) It was very well written though and obviously has an impact. I kind of want to know more about what's going on, but it's not really necessary for the story. Well great job, keep on writing! |
| spiritualized 2006-02-12 ch 1, | abuseargh... how depressing =( wonderfull written anyways, i love the beginning and ending. poor sasuke... i wonder what kakashi said... °.° and i didn't get the thing about being right ^^; *has to think about the revenge thing kakashi said so long ago, but i'm not sure if you mean that* |
| Odyssion 2005-11-26 ch 1, | abuse"It's probably rather morbid that he ripped his brother's cloak off the latter's broken body instead of letting them give him his own, but Sasuke hardly cares what other people think." So incredibly poignant. I think this is (so far) the only story I've read that has managed to combine tangible emotion and good fight scenes in such a way that the characters remain true to themselves. In the small interaction they have, the dynamics of Sasuke and Kakashi's relationship is apparent. I especially like the conclusion, which was quite a fitting end. Rather poetic and terribly tragic. Very, very well done. |
| Magical Poof 2005-11-25 ch 1, | abuseHmm... I liked this. It was interesting and a nice look into how it all plays out. I would never have expected Kakashi to be the one to kill him, though. |
| hermion8 2005-09-17 ch 1, | abuseaw...did he die? it's cute... |
| ElasticBobaTurtle 2005-07-29 ch 1, | abuseRagh. You are a wonderful writer. This is a beautiful piece of work, so wrenchingly sad and thoughtful at the same time. Purely lovely. |
| RandomBlahs 2005-07-29 ch 1, | abusecool |
| Celira 2005-06-26 ch 1, | abuseThis piece left me breathless. Enough said. |