The pairing is really unexpected. However, you do manage to pull it off somehow. I don't know how though, That has got to be the most unexpected pairing in DBZ history. I love how well written all your stories are. Your style is the thing that really caries your tales, and it is the saving grace for this crack pairing...

That was wonderful! I loved the way you made 18 so caring and loving.

Are you kidding? It definately works! I think the reason that makes it work is exactly the same reason you think it doesn't: that is not usual, or you don't see it everyday.

DBZ, doesn't have many options for yuri/shoujo-ai, unless you look very well. It actually has arond two pairings that would be good depending on how you use them. Bulma/18 been the best of them. I am actually making the Bulma/18 story myself, just because of that, and I didn't plan on that been the pairing either but yeah, it definately works.

Well, to finish this. I think you did an awesome job at this fanfiction. I loved it! And I would be delighted if you did a secual or continued this one. Although I don't think you will. Either way is still great!

You did well with this.

IT WAS GOOD BUT IT NEEDS MORE...WELL YOU KNOW

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Good stuff. I love this pairing! =^.^=

-Infamous Myo

That was good--I myself favor yuri, and this couple was one I actually supported! It was nice to find someone who actually wrote about them, even if they only did it to surprise people with the pairing.

Will there be more?

i really like this fic, a good break from the norm. btw, i would soo love to see yamcha/vegeta fic sometime, i should start looking...

~alex~

Yeah, it's outside your norm, but sticking a couple toes outside the lines once in a while's okay too. ;-) I definitely didn't see the pairing coming. I even had 17 pictured in my head for a minute before I was like, "Wait, 18's the woman. Duh! *blinks* Oh." LOL, nice little flash fic there. ^__^