I also enjoyed this a lot. The insight into Tsunade was refreshing and really well done. ^^

I liked this. Cause it's honest and not mushy -- which really doesn't fit Sasuke and Naruto's relationship at all. Beautifully written. ^^

Wow. Personally, I liked "Polarity", "Turns", and either the fourth or fifth of the third chapter best. But all of it is great.

simply blew my mind away. Don't stop.

Holy crap. If the last two drained the words right out of me, this one sucked it out forcefully. O.o So beautiful...gah. ok. i shouldn't write reviews. i suck at them. lol. but. wow. don't ever. EVER stop writing. EVER.

So ok. I was planning to give you a brilliant review for a brilliant piece of pose. but no. can't.
Yes. I love the last one. Who doesn't I wonder...But yes. I do. I have to thank you for writing these. They're gorgeous. wonderful. BEAUTIFUL even.

I suppose I could put all these reviews in the last chapter.

But what fun woutld THAT be?

:D
Anyway. Wow. These were gorgeous. I really really don't have the words for these...just...wow. I'm sorry. how am I supposed to give you THREE reviews. lol. I'll be crap at it. but, honestly, you should "drabble" more. That brought tears to my eyes.

Oh man. The way you write, I love it. Especially the way you characterize. It's dead on. After reading, the only thing I can think is "That's exactly how it is." *loves*

I didn't really like the first chapter--not up to your standards, I have to say. The imagery was nice, but not as fluid as I'm used to from your writing.

The second, I have to say, was gorgeous, though. Totally made up for the first. There's a sort of underlying yearning that runs through it that I've felt in the series itself. Beautiful.

i sort of think of the word "regret" when I'm reading this...
like it! keep going!

If only more authors wrote at this level. I loved the characterization. It really made me pity Jiraiya.

Please continue this. I really enjoy reading it.

I always have loved your stuff. I don't normally like SasuNaru, but this was really well written.