awesome game! great plot for lots of fun!

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Hy, well I'm not really use to this but as I really love your storry, I decided to go on and post a review...
All of this to say that I like the way you write about the marauders, they're behaving and all plus Lily , the onlt one problem so far is that i think it is a pretty good storry whit events and suspens, and you like so much to read some more about it.
To know if James' mother gonna live or not, and to see how sirius and remus are gonna manage this mariage thing(I relly love those two I should say) so I hope so much that sme new chapters are or have been thought.

thanks for the story it is great really
Chloe
PS: sorry for the faults(I suppose there might be some) I don't always speak english very well ^^.

So, er, are you ever going to write any more of the story?

Why on Earth would you leave it off there!?! This story is so good!

Wow! This story is AWESOME! But please please please please add new chapter... I luv it, I really do! I can't tell you nothing 'bout grammar mistakes or other kind of ** cuz I'm not paying attention to it ;p But whole story is great! It's funny etc. etc... I don't know if you understand something of that comment cuz I write really chaoticaly and I'm not certain if I use proper words cuz I'm tired and I'm too lazy to look it up in dictionary xD ADD NEW CHAPTER!

awesomely sweet. haha. Remus and Sirius fanservice... oh my dear lord. loving it... I really hate the mooshy gooshy, 'i wuv you' stuff with R/S, so this is so enjoyable. ^_^

AW! lovin' it. weird thing is, is that i've always hoped something like a LilyandJames situation would happen to me... but haha, all the guys that like me are nothing like James!

Good chapter!

lovely... i may not review many more chapters, until i get home from school... because i'll be too enchanted to stop and review!
~~loves and kisses,
~*Saer*~

So Great! Never Read Anything Like This! Funny And Clever, Therefore I Must Conitnue Readin;

Hi!
Just begging for chapter 15...PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE?!?! please?

If not just read my fic Remembering to Live. It's a H/G fic and would love your opinion! Ta-tah! *hugs* Emy

Clearly a new Tolstoy is amongst us

this is a very good story. i cant wait to find out what happens to James' mom. i really hope you write more of this story.

its cute =] interesting this isnt done before i dont think... new idea good job i hope u'r continuing with it =]
~Arista

Darn you blacksmoon! You beat me for longest review! THREE- no-FOUR TIMES! *scrolls down review list* MAKE THAT FIVE TIMES! *pouts* Anyway, I decided that i forgot many things in there. So i adding on. *Throws look at blacksmoon to let her know that i will not rest without trying to beat her though i doubt i will*

One thing i forgot that is ABSOLUTELY HILARIOUS is the things like 'la chucaracha!' and 'Ay Caramba!' Oh my gosh i was trying not to laugh as loud as i wanted to because the little ones are taking their naps. But OH MY GOSH was it funny!
'You...are...kidding...me, right?'
'AY CARAMBA is you wife?!?!' hahahaha! Brilliant!

Aunt Noel... What can i say? Where would we be without her? I daresay that the relationship wouldn't be quite the same...

But the one thing that had me, no lie, off my chair laughing was the following...
"“I just don’t realize how you can be acting as though everything’s so... normal.” Remus finally said what had been on his mind for the past twenty hours.

“Course I can! What’s so unusual about being gay?” asked Sirius loudly, as though he was talking to somebody on the other part of the Library.

Remus instantly grew pale.

“Keep it quiet!” he hissed.

“Why?” Sirius asked naively. “You’re worried somebody might find out about our...gayness?”

“Stop saying that word!”

“Which one? Gay or gayness?”

“Both!”

“But aren’t you gay on a day like this?” Sirius pretended to be shocked, “Honestly, Moony, that’s disappointing. I thought you’d understand. The winter is nearing, so we should be enjoying the last warm days of autumn.”

“You know what I mean.” mumbled Remus.

“Oh, you meant like... oh, I see.” Sirius went on with playing his part of a confused and innocent boy. “Well, that’s just naughty of you, Remus John Lupin! Shame on you. Like I’d be talking about GAYNESS in that sort of... homosexual kinda way.”"

THAT definitelly highlighted my day! Well I think I will just put quotes of my favorite parts in here. But first, Are you going to skip ahead sometime to have James propose and when they find out Lily is pregnant and in the delivery room? Just wondering...

“Then why are you telling me this? What do you need me for? You need my blessing or what? Shouldn’t you be in some broom closet shagging your brains off?” I know it was suppose to be sad and tear wrenching, and it was!, but i just couldn't help but laugh a little!

"Instead of saying it and before even realizing what he was doing, James leaned towards Lily and wishfully pressed his lips against hers.

Lily winced, completely unprepared for this, promptly feeling tingles running through her body. She thought her lips were nearly set on fire as she reflexively accepted the kiss, closing her eyes and sharing the most perfect moment she had experienced in her entire life.

Their kiss held passion, strength and urgency Lily had never felt with her previous boyfriend, Rodolphus Lestrange. It contained trust and hunger and made her want to last forever."
Yay! The start of a wonderful joyous relationship that with out it, we would never have our dear Harry.

I would love to continue but i really must go now. *hugs and hersheys kisses* Emmy. (Read my fic please!)