I liked da story, lookin forward to reading whre your going wit the story:-) Looking forward to reading the next installment. Keep up the good work! xx

OH PLEASE YOU COULD'VE WROTE MORE I'M WHINING OVER HERE!

ASHLEY

Great story. Its been quite some time since you updated (over a year i think) so i honestly did think you had forgotten about it but know your working on it again i hope you update soon.

PS Whats happend TO Merle i'm just wondering because she is my favorite character in the series.

I'm completly comfused now! I don't know whose where or what is wanted with whom! Good, jobP I think that this is deffinatly a good way to tell a story. Kinda sad and twisted and weird, but good none the less. I'm now dieing to know whose behind all this and for what reason. Good work, you sure do have a way of writing stories. Keep up the good work.

Your good PLEASE UPDATE the wait is killing me.

OMG OMG OMG...::takes deep breath::...! Very nice dark fic! Well, I've read most of your Excaflowne fanfiction and it is totaly my style! Keep up the wonderful writing and please, update! _ Thanks!

Hummm, you're right. I hate the word fate and yet it seems to find its way into my life. Sucks, huh?

This is a very good story...but do hurry up and get out the next chapter. _

What indeed...I think that's what all of us are waiting to figure out. Maybe we'll see next chapter, eh? One can only hope...heh. Great story, poor widdle Van *Evil laughter*

Fate is anything but harmless and innocent, I can assure you... especially if it's got anything to do with Escaflowne... poor Van-honey. He struggled so hard and she's there anyway! And now they're stitching him up without anaesthetic... AGAIN! But, don't you mind my blabbering. _ Great job as always... Keep up the good work! _- love Koneko Kamiya

MORE! MORE! . . . please? This is so emotional . . . excellent, though I'm in pain here for them . . .keep it up!

Ohhhh WHAT do they want with her? this is a great fic can't wait for the next chapter!

You have a wonderful intriguting story but I do wish you would move the story on. The 10 chapters you wrote could have taken half of that and given it a side story as well as to who is doing this. At the current pace it will take over 25 chapters to get anywhere. Sounds like a soap opera. I do hope you contiune to write more but please speed up the plot so that your readers can stay interested. As it is for all readers to be impatient.

don't do this 2 me! this is torture! it's so good i want 2 read more and there's nothing left on the page! look, i'm begging now for u 2 hurry and write more! please? save me from the insanity!

CONTINUE! that's all i got to say to you

Yay! _ Another great chapter, Penybright-sama. The only thing I can say while staring in awe at your writing style is "write more!" (my, how predictable. ::sweatdrop::) I'll be waiting eagerly for next chapetrs. In the meantime I think I'll cheer up my Van-plushie... _ Keep up the great job! _- love KK-chan