I am guessing this is Folken's POV about Van for some reason.
This is well-written. Good job.

very nice writing...very descriptive...keep up the good work

I is confused...but it was still very cool...I think..._

Ok... I love your writing style! I absolutely adore it! _ Ok.. and as for the 'draw your own conclusions' bit... I believe this is Van-chan... well... he is bound by all the responsabilities of being a king at his young age... he is bound to his people and to him home, and that is one of the reasons why he can't just leave and go off with Hitomi (kind of obvious ne?)... but another thing that binds him is his love for Hitomi... he can't go to her and she can't come back to him... but his love forbids him to love another... He cannot let go of Hitomi but can't reach her either... ;_; poor honey! great fanfic!

This was great! The tone is reflective and serene, but there's also really deep with strong emotions in it as well. M