... Wow. Just- wow. Every time I read this, it gives me this... chill, of sorts. It seems... so bitter, but at the same time... I don't know, it almost goes past bitterness into... ah, hell. I can't even find the words, and I'm practically a walking dictionary.

It's... wow. If you have /anything/ more like this... /please/ share it.

... yeah, still speechless.

This is so touching!

Okay, this is so powerful. So beautiful. You are a GENIUS. All of these parallels, all of these ways of thinking...oh my god, wow, this is...beautiful. It's on my faves, definitely...wow. wow. WOW. You are amazing.

Love this one ^-^

LOVE IT!

This story is written in a unique style. I like it! its a great sotry and keep writing more like them! ^^

wow. talk about harsh. this is going back on everything you say yet its how the relationship works out. i like this.

"They’ve found true love. Or at least, they’ve found love. Satoshi won’t take it in case it breaks. Krad will go after it in order to break it." Ah, the Krad/Dark reference makes me happy! But I liked the poem. In the words of one of my own reviewers, it was "bittersweet and accepting". If only I could remember what story that review was for...ah well. Very nice! Depressing, but nicely showing the contradicting views.

Uweh? I'm confused. It's good, but what does it mean? Huh? I'm so stupid!

ME AGAIN! Lurv this story, Scribbles-sama! The One-Shot Muse bit you, eh? She's bitten me too, and I'm in the process...so yeah! Gr8 st0ry!

~BlueRoseDragon

Wow. oO

It is confusing-ish. Well, not really. I'm just not good at actually understanding what I read and...stuff. Yeah.

The way you wrote it is teh awesome. Simple, yet it feels like it goes in an unending circle of thought. I like unending circles of thought.

I agree with Krad. Breaking stuff is fun. Especially love.

I'm sorry. I know this wasn't in the humor sec, but I found some of the things Krad to be funny. Like:
Krad only wants a toy.
or
Krad wears Satoshi.
or
Krad can break things.
or
Krad doesn’t even know it’s there.
I really don't know why I think these are funny, but I'm eating ice cream right now and had suger, so I'm not right in the head right now... I think I'll reread it when I'm off I'm suger buzz. ^_^

"I also do not own the One-Shot Muse, who attacked me twice in one week."

Beautiful one-shots they are, though.

creepy but cool ^_^

>>I'm not really one for poerty, but every now and then I dip my nose in and see if there's anything worthwhile. I think this was the most worthwhile poetry I've read in a very long time. With poetry you're not really telling a story of an event, but you're using words to create feelings, whether it be from imagery or otherwise. I think you've got that skill down pat. Good job, you've successfully transcended genres, and still have caught me with nothing but praise in my mouth.