 FrEaKyAoIFaN 2006-10-09 . chapter 3I'm so into it...its so fantastic! i hope u finishing it of!! ^_^ can't wait for ur next chapie! Yay |
 Satan's Bloody Vampire Kitten 2006-05-25 . chapter 3i really love this story, please write more. I'll just die if you dont.
~Satan's Kitten~ |
 Aimed mischief 2006-05-07 . chapter 3OOh, nice!! I liked it!! Good job, mate!! ^_^'
Take care,
Belle |
 Marz 2006-02-23 . chapter 3Wow!! Excellent story! You've got me hooked...
I'm so sad there are only three chapters. I noticed it's been a good amount of time since you've updated and I really hope you haven't given up on this. You can't leave us hanging!
I like the way you've characterized everyone--they seem in-character, which is nice. I also liked how you made Tyson the Kai-ologist. It fits.
I really want to know why Kai and Rei were fighting. Whatever it was, it must have been bad since they weren't talking for a whole year.
Tala and Bryan are wonderful. So cute! I hope Bryan will be okay, like he says he will. Having your arm crushed...that's nothing light. I'm glad you included their relationship in this story--it adds something a little extra, a little more flavor.
Another thing I want to know is what was listed next to Rei's name that made Tala freak out. I have a feeling it had something to do with his emotional state, but that's as far as my guess goes. Whatever it was, I don't think Tala ended up telling Kai about it. If he had, I'm sure Kai would have brought it up and forced Rei to talk about it.
I feel bad for Rei. Does he think that the others will look down on him if he tells them about it? I mean, yeah, they'll be hurt when they find out how long it's been going on, but I think they'd be more hurt if they find out on their own. Somehow, I think Kai will find out that way. I doubt Rei'd tell him willingly, at least without prompting.
Speaking of Rei and Kai, I'm so glad they made up!! Were they together before they fought, or were they just really good friends? That part wasn't so clear...
Anger management class? Tyson made him go? How the hell did that happen?! You have to continue this... Does the anger management have anything to do with why they were fighting?
I'm actually kinda sad that you made Rei a girl...though I'm sure you have your reasons. Is it going to become part of the plot or was it just for your amusement? Just curious. :)
Anyway, wonderful story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter. It doesn't matter how long I have to wait as long as the next chapter is coming. Believe me, I'm the last person to be telling people to update faster. ^-^
Again, fantastically done. I'll be looking for that author alert in my inbox. Thanks! Happy writing! :D |
 xImperfectlyX 2005-10-13 . chapter 3dun Dun DUNN! ReiRei never said anything, th=is could be bad. But I think ReiRei will be able to handle it...with Kai's help of course ^_~ And I LOVE YOU! OMG! So many authors make Kai so OOC! It drives me crazy! I just want to kill them! But Kai isn't OOC in this story, I thank you for that. It makes it much more enjoyable.
- xImperfectlyX |
 xImperfectlyX 2005-10-13 . chapter 2Oh. Poor ReiRei! Imma read the next chapter.
- xImperfectlyX |
 xImperfectlyX 2005-10-13 . chapter 1O! This is interesting!! I so wanna read the next chapter...why aren't I? Wow. I could be reading the next chappie instead of wasting my time reviewing. Nah jk. Good chapter. Now imma read the next chapter and review it alright? Alright. Well see ya in the next review XD
- xImperfectlyX |
 Qiuyue 2005-09-01 . chapter 3dude...nice, i know what your feeling though. at least you've been able to voice your pain though. what's gonna happen to kai?...and rei? |
 amber 2005-08-08 . chapter 3 This story is awsome r u goin to finish it |
 rebecca85 2005-07-12 . chapter 3Ahhem.. Nice fic.
My only question: When will you update
Luv, rebe |
 affinityreign 2005-07-02 . chapter 3*sniff* wow, This is really good. Quite sad. T.T you must have had a bad life but i'm not going to tel you what a poor child you are. You sound like a very nice and strong willed person to be able to talk about what happen to you, even if you use other characters in your place. Very good job! keep up the great work I'll be watching to make sure you update soon! ^_^ |
 Rae TB 2005-06-28 . chapter 1*sniff* I CAN'T BELIEVE I HAVEN'T REVIEWED THIS!
*smacks self up*
this is such an original idea executed so amazingly well...
I am honored to have this dedicated to me, and I'm so impressed with your strength. A large chunk of you is definitely a part of this and it really shines through.
I feel like I should be talking more about myself but...man...it's hard to come up with what hasn't been said yet. I feel like I know you so well now that we both kind of now what the other has been through, ne?
Especially since reading this story...it just screams you and man...
This is so good that I'm at a loss of words...I just...don't know what to say! Words really can't describe what this story has triggered within me. But don't worry, it's a good thing.
You are so faved my dear. *high five* keep up the kick ** job. |
 bloody brandy 2005-06-16 . chapter 3 hm this is unique... you better finish it 'cuz i'm hooked. |
 animeobsession 2005-06-11 . chapter 3I LIKE THIS STORY! KEEP WRITING! |
 safire flame 2005-05-20 . chapter 3This is really good so far...and don't worry about the writing, I'm doing the same. I've never cut myself before, but I've gone through something else, and I'm writing about it. It helps, you know? Yes, you know, you're doing it -rolls eyes at self-
I love the idea of the game, though I'd like to know what Kai and Rei fought about...that bit made me curious.
And the tidbit with Bryan and Tala was sweet. |