Interesting.

Highly enjoyable, yes. :D A wee bit of a problem with the dialogue - in some places it seems stilted or unnatural, but your descriptions and metaphors are absolutely ace. The mention of mathmatics (which seems a far more Helo-ish pursuit than anything akin to the ethereal) co-mingled with the emotions... e, I think I fangirled a bit. XD

Awesome story. Off to read the next one!

~Chev

I love the way you brought the intro and conclusion together with that line.

Great story.

Wow, I really liked that. Not sure where Helo's going to go with all of this.
One thing, though. If you're going for the typical taunt, then it would be 'you and *who's* army'. Sorry, grew up with teachers. ;)
Thanks.

Ventured in search of a good Helo piece and found this. Very nicely done. Good transitions between the various portions-- Sharon, Kara, Apollo. I liked the little character connections and insights. In short, way to get into his head. Helo's story is fast becoming my favorite of the BSG world. Here's to season 2!

Will you be doing any additional writing with these characters?

nicely done and well thought. liked the mood/tone set. i believe you captured helo well and the repetion of those words had a nice and strong effect. thanks.

I loved this. I loved the way that you got into Helo's head and all of the conflicting thoughts going on. I hope you write some kind of conclusion to this or take this further.

Beautifully well written I love how show the emotional termoil within Helo. I hope the writters for the show take a similar approach.

perfect. utterly, utterly perfect. painful and harrowing, the best kind of fangirl crack mainlined and read-read-reread with top lip being chewed upon in rapt concentration. you paint helo in the most delicate light.

from "Unraveled. Helo liked things to be straightforward. Philosophy was great.. " to "Helpless." is such a wonderful piece which has me scouring your profile for links to more work. bravo.

i look forward to reading more of your words.

Very good. is that the end? I want more!

Fabulous writing! Helo was very well written. Are you interested in writing a sequel where Helo sees Boomer again? In short, this is a great episode addition. Thanks for sharing :).