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| Ukume 2005-08-07 ch 1,  | abuseVery good Haikus! I had to write one for school about scare crows but it kinda sucked so whatever...I like yours Way better! Especially 'brothers'. |
| Sreym 2005-03-06 ch 1, | abuseThese were great, I loved them. Especially "Cam", it was the best. Great work. |
| DeathDragon66 2005-03-05 ch 1, | abuseNice haikus. I like your Accidents Happen haiku one. Hehe. |
| AngelMouse5 2005-03-04 ch 1, | abusereally well done poems and great imagery that they invoked! Really well done my friend, great work! |
| garnetred 2005-03-04 ch 1, | abuseExcellent haikus. |
| Crimson-Ranger 2005-03-04 ch 1, | abuseNice, I shall go read Sentry Duty next. ^_^ Haikus are fun. =D A ** to remember if its a quite longer one than the ones you have. |
| Yellowwolf 2005-03-04 ch 1, | abuseHey, cool poems, they were great!! I also read you story on nice one! “You’ve been reading the dictionary again?” lol, best line :) Can't wait to read more from you!! |
| CamFan4Ever 2005-03-04 ch 1, | abuseAwesome haikus!! Love them! I really love "Accidents Happen"! |
| MzDany 2005-03-04 ch 1, | abuseDana, A certain poetic liberty has been applied here for the sake of the effect of my haikus as well as maximum comprehensibility of their essence. Dany |
| cmar 2005-03-04 ch 1, | abuseAs someone with no aptitude for poetry at all, I admire you for this. Some very nice imagery there, and several were very sweet. |
| Dana1 2005-03-04 ch 1, | abuseYour first one is 6 7 4 3 is 5 6 5 4th is 6 7 5 The others actually are the right rhythm |