xcuse me a sec...*blows nose and wipes eyes* Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! great fic tho...

sniff that..was... sniff so...sweet sniff Im really crying over it... embarassing...Really really really really great fanfic!

*sniff* the last part was soo sad...*weeps*

I'm having an extremely hard time figuring which fic was better...ahh i like them both equally! *hugs both Yuki and Saturn*

*wide eyes* Well...that ending was sure stunning. I like it.

ahh... the beginning is so much better now. ecwn laughed so hard at the original version. this one is better, albeit short. (it's like, 1/3 of mine?) okay, i read this under really peaceful mood, with the song turned on, so i guess this creates the atmosphere, ne? can stress a lot more on the church part. like raiha's thoughts and recollections. and fuuko's reaction. follow the song, yuki-chan. fuuko must say something. yep, and... yeah the ending is quite good. *sigh in satisfaction* that's why i say repetition creates EMOTIONS... yup, the thingie is, stress more on the feelings... where it should be stressed. the walking away, nothing to be said part is okay, but fuuko's feelings? must throw something at raiha, preferably her shoe. one beeg beeg baddie thing is that the story doesn't fit the content of the song. okay, i'm not one to preach about uses of songs in songfics, but... but... it's a ballad... with it's own story... and i like the song. forever wicked, saturn