LoL!
I shall tune in.

LyRa

Short, but extremely creative. I would have never thought to find a story like this over here... trying to find a Team Rocket fic other than my own, don't mind me...

I'm glad you didn't stop it there. My general feelings toward one shots are: if you can tell the whole story in one chapter is it really worth writeing at all? any way you didn't tell a story, you just said that ash played a gameboy for a week and here's his pokemon

There's no punch line.

With a humorous story like this, you need some sort of ending that puts a twist on the story.

lol. funny. I like it. I duno what else to say. Please contiue.

P.S. I would like to invite you to read my first fic "Keeping Memories" now completed.

It is good... but make sure that you kick his as more