Reviews for Ash and the game

Lyra loves to read 2005-03-08 ch 2,	abuseLoL! I shall tune in. LyRa
Satine89 2005-03-08 ch 2,	abuseShort, but extremely creative. I would have never thought to find a story like this over here... trying to find a Team Rocket fic other than my own, don't mind me...
Pokewriter 2005-03-04 ch 1,	abuseI'm glad you didn't stop it there. My general feelings toward one shots are: if you can tell the whole story in one chapter is it really worth writeing at all? any way you didn't tell a story, you just said that ash played a gameboy for a week and here's his pokemon
Raichu 2005-03-04 ch 1,	abuseThere's no punch line. With a humorous story like this, you need some sort of ending that puts a twist on the story.
Soft Flame Matthias 2005-03-04 ch 1,	abuselol. funny. I like it. I duno what else to say. Please contiue. P.S. I would like to invite you to read my first fic "Keeping Memories" now completed.
Necromuda 2005-03-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseIt is good... but make sure that you kick his as more