Very nice, very nice. I could see it-and I love Chloe and Lois' banter. :) Poor Chloe! Nice story. ;)

I like this a lot. As a dialogue heavy fic the pace is very smooth and doesn't feel clunky at all. Very real and show related dialogue. Excellent job!

A.K.

Aw...so cute! Yay for Chlark. :)

o goodie! another happy ending! well kinda, still good tho

Excellent fic.

This was really good! You did an excellent job of portraying the characters actions and how everything would work. Very realistic. I was glad to see this because I remember being apalled to find that in an episode that revovled around Chloe, she was only in it for about 2 minutes. This really IS a missing scene, that should have been included. Nice Job!

Excellent.

great pace and narrative flow.I'm a fan.

*sighs in bliss* What a WONDERFUL Chlark ending to Gone (especially the "It's always you", a beautiful reminder of the awesome save in Obscura that I love). Any more coming? There is so little good Chlark, especially Chlark as well-written and with such good mechanics as this. It really makes a big difference in my enjoyment, and I can tell you I loved reading this one. Keep up the good work!

Not much on the romance, do another one that shows more of Clark/Chloe romance. Otherwise really nicely done.

I reviewed this on LJ, but I wanted to reiterate how much I love it. Because I do.

One of my favorite things is the end, where Chloe shrugs before delivering her line about knowing Clark would come for her, as if it was the most obvious thing in the world. Really, this is what Gone should have been...