Wow, this is good! ^_^

Very nice. I liked this one. LOL! I'm running out of words!

Nice take on Adelbert and his thoughts on Julia, the demons, Cecilie, the whole conflict. He is an interesting character that not a lot of people consider. I'm glad at least one person took the time to give him some time in the spotlight!

Little Crit:

"...left everything in her equally inadequate brother’s sons meant you were entitled..." Are you talking about Gwen, Conrad, and Wolf?