 yumeniai 2008-01-18 . chapter 2i just want to cry...it's so terriblly awfully sad! It makes me want to tear out my hair!! It's just so sad...Will you update? Please do, I really want to finish this story. |
 Eldr-Fire 2007-08-06 . chapter 2Ah, where is the rest? It's very good so far, but... Rin had better not die. That would kill me. D-= |
 suzako 2007-05-20 . chapter 2 that cannot end like this! I mean, I just love angst-torture-abuse-and-all-that-stuff-fics, but... I want more ç_ç Great work, really. |
 MHS 2006-12-14 . chapter 2Well, I was in the mood to read something along the lines of angsty. I have to say I wound up a little too squimish to read the first chapter, and I really didn't understand what happened towards the end of the second chapter at all. Still, the writing is nice, and you have good descriptions. |
 scrutinize 2006-12-01 . chapter 2Tragic and haunting. Marvelous writing. :] |
 MazokuTenshi 2006-05-13 . chapter 2oh my god... b-u-t-full! |
 Calimora 2006-05-12 . chapter 2The many many pathos of Hatake Kakashi. And boy, do you give them play. While not as shearly tear jerking or riveting as a few of your others, this one does deliver like a kick in the gut. |
 SinfulSkye 2006-02-18 . chapter 2-squee- I love it. It's sad though, but I've always been a fan of that Mind-** genre of yours. Hell, half (or maybe more) of my stories belong snugly in that genre...because I love to write angst, and I genrerally love ** with minds. Oh, dear, I've just gone in a circle, haven't I? |
 bubblehead 2005-12-13 . chapter 1Added to my Abuse C2. Very poignant story. Lovely. |
 Pointed Teeth 2005-11-30 . chapter 2Oh my, that first chapter is just _brutal_ his fingers, his leg, his _rib_ and when the torturor _kissed_ him I just about smashed the screen.
The part where Kakashi compared his torturors to Ibiki and said he may as well just do tha job himself was just perfect.
I do have to question how Kakashi is still alive with that amount of injury done to him - it just doesn't seem feasible unless he's under some kind of forced-healing jutsu or similar.
I hope you have plans to continue this because I would love to see what you do with Rin's pregnancy, and hopefully Kakashi getting out alive (I have less hope for Rin, a gut feeling I guess).
Anyway, wonderful story ^_^ |
 DemonQueen14 2005-11-29 . chapter 2SAD BUT GOOD, CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER! |
 Emperatris 2005-08-18 . chapter 2I love all your Naruto fics! Now, this one is, as usual, as good as the others. I've been looking for a KakashixRin fic. You're just too good to be true! Damn you!! Haha.. :) |
 sharingank 2005-08-03 . chapter 2You, my dear, have a way with words that is simply astounding. I was mesmerized throughout the enitre story, even though it was ripping my heart out to see Kakashi go through that...(he is undeniably my favorite character ever).
You deserve much more attention than you've gotten. That was beautiful as it was painful, poetic as it was macabre.
Wonderful.
~Ashley~ |
 ElasticBobaTurtle 2005-07-30 . chapter 2Ah. This is such a beautiful story. So sad...>_<
I just love how you portray the characters. So real and...argh. Yeah, you get the point. |
 ElasticBobaTurtle 2005-07-30 . chapter 1o_O Wow. Daym. Morbidly frightening, and at the same time beautiful in a twisted way...
That was wonderful. And I'm probably going to have nightmares now, but it's alright because it was so good. ;_; |