Impressive, a clear view on the subject of what if ranma got a life like he wishes for.
also, you keep the charecter themselves, nobody seems to have lost himself in the process

"End" ? Huh? What? No way! this sounds like a really cool beginning of a fanfic! it's not an "end"

Very nice and I hope you continue!

~Luna

Excellent chapter.

So, she's going to try it eh? All I say is good luck to her, but to be wary of what she wishes for.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

good on ya

Never have been a fan of Akane, but she did keep the real series going on...and on. and on.

Decent to good writing, though.

"End"? The story is only half-started.

Nice to see that Akane had that epiphany.

And to all those reviewers saying that she can't change: yes she can. Who said the change will be instantaneous? Her uphill battle to win Ranma's heart has only just begun. And as for the mallet, despite what fanon has you think, she is not the violent maniac portrayed in fanfics, especially after the Herb Arc. In fact as far as I can tell she never even yells at Ranma in volumes 26 and 30, and the Saffron Arc. If this story takes place between or after these story arcs this isn't all that unrealistic.

To the author: I like this story and where it could go, please continue it no matter what others say.

end?

its a great start if you ask me.

So, Akane remembers everything. Is she trying to drag everything back into the way it was? STUPID! Does she think that just because she says she'll change that she'll give up her violent ways? She's been doing it for so long, I doubt that by saying "I have to change" will make her become peaceful or at least someone who won't bring out the mallet whenever she thinks Ranma messes up.

I just want to know, do you really think it'll change just because Akane misses him AFTER he's gone? When they come back (and I know they will be as this seems to ahve that touch to it) everything will start up again won't it? Cologne won't give up just because Ranma and Akane's engaged, married, having sex, whatever. Also, the same with Ukyo. Then, Akane, though maybe she changed, would go back to her temperamental insane self. I suggest you take that into mind before having this kind of sappy 'Akane misses Ranma after he's gone and wishes to be with him' kind of story.

Nice one...although I find it a bit disturbing that Akane changes so fast from "mallet-happy" to "I think things through before I act". Of course, you can explain the change with the magic of the soul trap, but that would be too easy.

Continue it...I'd like to see where that leads.

eh the end? what the??
I don't like this story of yours btw, I just don't like Akane. :)

Ack! Now Akane's gone in to ruin Ranma's nice, normal life. Bad girl.

So... it's been four months. What happens next?

lol. Ranma, of all books, heartily enjoys something about a nice, normal life... which necessarily means: no plot, boring characters, boring action. Funny, and somewhat appropriate.

Your writing skill does you credit. Your first few paragraphs, however, though well written, are very cliche. You'd probably get a few more readers without such a cliche hook. (Just a suggestion.)

Oh great, now Mallet Woman is entering Ranma's nice easy NORMAL life. Who knows how different it will make his life. This is good and please do continue.