Gah i love it.

In character and sexy.

AH
I LOVE YOU!

cute

I loved this!

I like the fact that nothing seemed OOC about them. Nice story

The style is...okay, a bit odd, but very effective. Basically stream of consciousness, but you pulled it off well. It gave the story almost a kind of rhythm, which made it very exhilirating to read. I enjoyed it thoroughly (it doesn't hurt that I really like Shikamaru/Temari).

Awesome!

(O.O) wow...this was really good! likr really REALLY GOOD! I love your writting style, and making it come out as if it were a chess game. That was awsome. *claps*

Very well done - beautiful imagery and descriptions. Hot!

So hot!! I love it!

I like this...

...where'd my gf go...

:D

Yes, I am slowly being converted into a ShikaTem fan, and fabulous works like this definitely encourage it. Lovely way of being omniscent without ever leaving the character's head.

AWESOME FIC! I loved the way you were descriptive on your writing! *high 5*

Keep up the great work, woman! ^_-

-Breezy

dopeness.

all i can say.