"But here, the alarms give me the odd impression of a goose trying to sneeze." LOL! snort...giggle!

What a descriptive phrase! I am loving these stories and how they build on each others...especially the glowing surgical gloves LOL! I'm finishing up this series, which I hope you will continue...pretty please? ...and checking out your other stories...yippee! Sincerely, jane

Another excellent POV! Weir's personality was very well done, and I have to say your Shep & McKay combo is one of the best treatments of their friendship I have seen!

It wasn't as good as some of your other stories, but well written as usual. I semi-enjoyed reading it.

Well, I'd definitely say you've managed to imbue Elizabeth with personality. I liked her thoughts on John and Rodney, how she brought them along initially for expertise/genes, but has found them to be much more necessary than that, and has also found them to be her friends.

I thought John's absolute determination to get Rodney out, and Rodney's equal determination to leave him made some very intense scenes. All the more so because we see it through Elizabeth's eyes. That she can see how badly it's affecting John somehow makes it seem much more real. I loved the snark during their exchanges, and John's rage at being unable to do anything. The solution was very good, I'm intrigued by just how much control John has over the systems. Their reunion was touching, even couched in more snark :).

Schweet story! Luved ti like the rest of yours! Characters were just like they should be! Awesome job!

LOVE IT!:) Toilet paper wars - that is great!:) LOL:) Got to love those boys:)

Another excellent story - please keep going. For someone who claims a lack of techno-experience, your plots and resolutions always work perfectly.

giddy is the way I would describe my reaction to seeing that you had writen another POV. It made my monday, sitting back with a beer and reading. Keep up the good work. This one from weir's POV was great and I enjoy the inclusion of the previous stories. The whole "thinking hard enough" line was priceless. Big thanks

wonderful work. Please write more.

This whole series has been a joy to read. The voices of and interaction between John and Rodney are incredible. It has been like watching a wonderful friendship develop and grow. You also write great team dynamics and exciting story lines. I love every story and this one was awesome. Thanks for sharing! Beth

Just love the friendship between Mckay and sheppard.

Lol, Zelenka and strip poker! Priceless.

Love all the trials and tribulations that Weir has to deal with. The Almost Toilet Paper War between the different scientists. :D

The immigration paperwork for that young soldiers family. Nice touch.

Lots of great things about this story. :D

Wow, that was great.

I loved how you described the little things- ie: the alarm on SGC and how different it is from Atlantis's.

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It was totally believable danger, and you wrote it really well.

SO. Good job! :)

*standing ovation* AWESOME! Very cool premise LOL that is was Kavenaugh's fault and John's apocolypse comments

“I think I’m thinking as hard as I can think, it just won’t respond. And no smart ass comments about how hard you think I can think. If you think you can think harder than I can think, then I think you’re more than welcome to try.”

LMAO :D

Poor Rodney gah you write him and John well, I could totally see John screaming at the air trying to get Rodney to tell him how to save h im. Excellent job, as always. Loved Weir's POV Can't wait for another installment *grin*

Excellent story... made me laugh, made me fearful for Rodney... and made me admire Weir for the near impossible job she does :-)