Intriguing subject and good writing, too bad it is abandoned. :/

That was so much fun! And so delightfully original! You rarely get new stuff in the Invader Zim fandom anymore. Dib is my favorite character, and I think you write him very well. This was one dizzying, sci-fi, acid-trip of a fic. Fantastic!

Love,
Francesca L.

I have to say that this is probably one of the most entertaining Invader Zim fics I've read, it's as good as the show if not better. I also love your Naruto fic Second Chance and will be leaving a review of it soon!

Very interesting story.
It's an wonderful idea, and well written. I like the bit about addictive cocoa. =)
I hope to see many updates!

Awesome fic. Update.

Quite a unique story. It interests me because not only does it remain creative and in character, but it lacks the inconsistancies of most fanfiction that deals with time skips. Please continue soon.

Another excellent chapter. Quite frankly I don't understand why this hasn't gotten more reviews. I wonder what Alpha has planned for Dib--or should I say Beta?

So this is what you've been up to lately. Yay!

Man, your Chosen Ones get it rough. Like Moorcock's Eternal Champion concept: Doomed to save the world, and get screwed over all at the same time!

It's been a while since I read this, so I had to re-read the first chapter. Dib and Gaz are so in character that I can hear their voice actors in my head as I'm reading. And the ch. 3 computer has the Mr. Scolex voice (in my head anyway). Neat-o! :)

Looks like things are just beginning to get interesting, anyway; I thought I'd have something more useful to say, but I guess not. Looking forward to more.

So...why DOES everyone have purple hair?

O...I like this. REALLY good. Can't wait till ya update.

Clever. It's nice to see this updated after all this time. I'm looking forward to more.

The human race doomed by Chocolate! That's absolutely fabulous, and completely believable. In fact I can't see anything in this that makes me think, "no way, THAT wouldn't happen."

I always had the impression of Gaz that if Zim ever succeeded in making her see him as a real threat, or just irritated her enough, that she'd kick his little green ass from here to Blortch. Was Gaz caught as unawares as the rest of us poor humans?

Seems anything else I could say at this point would be a plot-point question like that one, so I'll just wait and see what happens!

Wow, this is very good. So far this is a VERY original plot and very vivid characterization, especially of the older Dib. You really seem to have thought the story out, the detail about having Dib in the present and "original", and then suddenly existing as a clone was very clearly written and expressed. Also, the idea of not being the first clone to be made adds a spooky flavor to the fic.

Very cool, I hope you keep writing.

*Gasp* He's the last Dib, ain't he? They can't make no more after that!
Is Zim still alive? I can't wait for more

Neat. I feel sorry for the newest Dib clone. But the explanation for the Irkens wanting Earth is funny and original. I wonder what happened to Zim, and I'm also curious about the humans' adoption of paks.

Okay, you've definately caught my interest. This is an interesting, original premise and I'm definately looking forward to see where you go with it. The sudden jump from the original Dib to clone # whatever Dib was awesome too.

Man, the more I think about this, the more I love this idea. *pokie* Write more.