So, is that the end of the story? I'm a little confused by it. It was a very good story. I liked it.

A true masterpiece. Thanks for sharing it with us.

I liked the story and you should continue writing. One thing though, if you want more people to review, you minght want to change it so you will accept annoynomous reviews (if I spelled a word wrong there sorry. I'm a crappy speller) Kepp writing. Bye.