 lone goth-kitten 2/7/12 . chapter 6Talk about something new! Applause for the ingenuity!
Keep on writing, or I'll go insane from the suspence! |
 dragonic raptor 10/3/08 . chapter 6i really like your story and have been waiting for the next installment but it hasnt been updated...so im still waiting for the next chapter...i finally have an account here so i could add your story to my favorites list and alert list...which i did of course...i hope that u will add another chapter to your story soon because this story is probably one of my absolute favorites...in fact i pretty sure that it most likely is... but i have been disappointed that it hasnt been updated for a very long time so i hope that this review can help you get your motavation back...u can mail me if u need a beta... i would love to be able to help you with it...i have a few ideas if your interested in them about how to continue the story... so i guess u could mail me back and let me know soon ...okay? |
 Koshivuh 8/27/08 . chapter 6I really really like this Fanfiction. And I hope you update soon! It's been, what, about three years? |
 WhiteDemoness11 5/19/08 . chapter 6Oh...so it seems Sesshomaru was the cause of getting turned eh?..wonder why he doesn't undo it. m..maybe cuzza Kago? |
 LuNa aNgEl777 11/27/07 . chapter 6DEAR GOD Y! Y ITS SO GOOD I DIDNT WANT IT TO END!
Luna Angel |
 KazunaPikachu 8/15/07 . chapter 6wow. that was awesome! (.) ok, i noe u haven't updated in a LONG time but i just want u to noe that this was a great story that i just read! hope u still have the nack for writing! anyway cyas! (.) |
 zoebabii328 4/4/07 . chapter 6You're right
It DOES thicken
But OMG! There are WAY too many obsticles
I just want to know whether or not they'll be able to reach the older Sesshomaru first before he turns into a vampire
Unless ... well I wouldn't want it to be so soon if that's how it ens (whether or not they change)
Could you add more about Sesshomaru/Kagome next chapter or at least the one after that ... somehow ...
Just like a progression (it doesnt have to be M rated - yeah your story is M rated so I am guessing you're planning on something but Im just saying something - lesser - next ch. or soon at least)
Great story! Keep it up! |
 zoebabii328 4/4/07 . chapter 5olala! can't keep their hands (teeth) off each other :P
okay seriously,
yeah, pretty random!
oh well, next and last ch. (last until you update :K) |
 zoebabii328 4/4/07 . chapter 4Okay, it seems that last ch. I forgot about the blood issue. Well ... now I know why they both love each other's blood so very much.
Haha! Everytime she prays, we learn more and more. Just for the heck of it, can we see that list? lol
o.ONow they can never be apart! She acts upset but she knows she likes it :P
BEST LINES IN CH.:
- - ‘That’s my girl,’ Sesshomaru thought with a smirk, his inner demon ... suddenly possessive of the miko.
- - Kagome belonged to him and him alone, she had the mark to prove it, and so no one should be touching what was his!
okay thx! i was wondering about the poison - yeah now that i think about it the paragraph was perfect! it was subtle but said everything. so i guess that would mean that her bond to him would go through the passage of time - even before it actually happened!
but ... was the sesshomaru on the tree the same as the sesshomaru we're seeing now? |
 zoebabii328 4/4/07 . chapter 3Aw, kawaii! He calls her little one.
Okay, he DOES know about Rin. And she lives w. him. oh! fatherly affection! just the way I like it. And now she can stay beautiful in her 20's forever!
Sesshomaru is a little OOC, but what can you do. It's because he's weak - it's sort of a nice adjustment :D
Haha nice naming - like japanese anime names (they mean something - or ... I guess a good amount of names here mean something, too, but ...)
omg! Kagome's killer! She's just, out of control wild and it's also a little OOC, but it's also cool. Kagome is finally sticking up for herself and other with actions instead of words (then again, it's her instincts taking a hold of her)
Okay, I think I understand.
It's not that Sesshomaru is a Taiyoukai, it's that he bit Kagome's blood. And she didn't turn right away because he didn't take all her blood and because of her miko powers. But after biting Sesshomaru, she's starting to become more instictual, in the vampire sense. Am I right? Well it's probably in an upcoming ch. anyway.
Ja Ne |
 zoebabii328 4/4/07 . chapter 2I luv the connection they feel towards each other and how they can tell so much about each other just by looking at them or at their eyes.
Yeah! Kagome isn't afraid of him! :P
Next ch. sounds awesome!
And Rin is still alive, that's so great for Sesshomaru, but I wonder if he knows or finds out then |
 zoebabii328 4/4/07 . chapter 1o.OInteresting - I really luv the idea. Especially because of vampires and having a bond between the two
I just feel so bad for Sesshy-kun, though. He lost all his pride.
But I'm confused ...
Is it that Kagome still goes in between the worlds but as a vampire?
And the next day or so she sees Sesshomaru in her class because he was able to survive until her time - is that what happened?
BTW, in the prologue, he starts off in the present and then recaps to tell us the whole story. However, it implies that she goes away or something ... that's sad! Or is he just saying that she left and then reappeared (in his class) - although to her it was a lapse of a day or so. |
 aninaig 12/27/06 . chapter 6no I love it you have to finsh it at lest give me another chapter I NEED SOME THING TO READ well I love it plz update soon _ |
 DreamBeamz 7/15/06 . chapter 6You stated you hope you have at least one reader still out there, guess what *giggles* you have me! :) |
 Beautiful miko 7/12/06 . chapter 6this story is coral cloud-wolfbane and you dont have to update soon just when you can... i just hope it happens before i forget what all has happened well seeya for now |