I loved it, though there were some heart-wrenching parts.;-; Did you ever end up writing any kind of sequel?

I love this story.

Two of my favorite characters... Yay!

Thank you so much! This was an awesome story!

Kay, kay, put that last review on the wrong story. >>
lol. -This- one's my favorite, though the other one's a very close second. ^^

Finally, some good chaosCanaan fluff!

I declared chaos gay in the first game...Then I saw Canaan and thought 'PERFECT!'.

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I need a life...

I know I've already reviewed this fic, but I thought I'd let you know that I added your XS yaoi fics to my C2. It's a C2 for any XS yaoi pairing.

So of course I added your stuff! You're like one of the best Cc writers out there!! My Cc isn't even halfway as good as yours is.

If you know of any other XS yaoi fics, let me know so I can add them, but don't PM me. I'm not getting any PM's or alerts for some reason. My email is crazy_4_yaoi (at) yahoo (dot) com

I love your work! And I hope for future Cc from you!

Brilliant! This has got to be one of the better fics I've read in a long time. What makes it even better (to me) is that it's a Xenosaga yaoi. Those are rare.(at least I can't find many)

I like how we watch the relationship grow and I like how they didn't just jump to kissing and what not. I found the first kiss to be very sweet.

It was truly a 'aww' moment.

I'm a big fan! You inspired me to write my own Cc. I just published it. (Yeah, I read this a while ago, just hadn't the time to review.)

I can't wait to read more XS yaoi from you.

Your new fan,
Rikku

I love this, it's absolutely lovely, if you do make a sequel, you should try experimenting with chaos' past. That's just a suggestion though. :P

And again, just so you know, this fiction is absolutely lovely.

So bitterly sweet as you said.

Canaan's sudden confession so to speak was really something 'cos up until that point, I was holding my breath. Your way of writing and wording is absolutely intoxicating!

“Oh, look at me, I’m so pretty and have long blue hair and a chest that’s larger than most people’s heads.”

LMAO

[cough]

Overall a very cute and amusing chapter! I had plenty of laughs and it was nicely done. To the point where I felt Canaan's jealousy!~ Kudos.

'cept a few grammar errors, especially with the "to" and "too" wordings.

Oh, and a typo:

"I ain't deaf, but you must thing I'm blind! I don't serve drinks to minors!"

I think you meant think :P

Hope I was somewhat helpful there ^_^

Oh, what a great opening chapter! It provided the necessary background information to build up drama for said relationship perfectly if you were to ask me. I had a good laugh, too, with your description of how the Elsa crew snores.

chaos shirtless? ZOMGOSH! :P I shall fight to retain my dignity without squealing like a fangirl.

-applauds- Very well done! ^^ chaos redeemed himself a little, I suppose. And that's good, because he ticked me off really badly last chapter. XD

Congrats on finishing, and I'm off to read your Ed/Al!

YAY FOR KISSES AND HAPPEH ENDINGS! :3 If you do make a sequel, then WEE! I happily anticipate it! ^^

YAY! PARTY! (Balloons pop out of nowhere, confetti falls out form the sky, and people start dancing) Congradulations on completing your story! The ending is SO sweet.

It's also good to know that there's a chaosxKOS-MOS hater by my side, you know?

... Of course, there's a lot of people (I guess) out there who hate those two together, but still...

Yeah...

Anyways, I will be updating soon. I hope. It's just that I have solo and ensemble for band (yeah, I play the flute. I'm not all that good...) and my A.R. reading (I don't really wanna explain) and three writing contests and two art contests and math and science and work, work, WORK... Can't there be peace for once?

Sorry for my out-of-the-blue arterial explosion.

... Well, before I go, I just want to know if you have Yahoo! Messenger or AIM. If you do, can you give me your ID or SN? I'd really like to talk with you.

Yeah...

Well, like I've always said, AWESOME JOB!

YuhiruK.A.A.K.J. siging OFF! P.S. - I can't wait for your FMA story!

No, this can't end! -Bawls-

This chapter has inspired me to get over the large bump in my fanfic that I'm stuck at...Yay!

I love this story forever and ever! EDxAL FOREVER AS WELL!!

Kee!

-Flashback of the past half an hour-

*Is humming and flipping through e-mails* Junk...junk...junk...OMIGAWD! SHE UPDATED! *Nearly breaks mouse impatiently clicking LAST CHAPTER! YAYAYAYAYAY!

*Clicks on story...*

*AND -OH NO!- THERE'S ONLY FIFTEEN CHAPTERS!* Wha?! Why isn't the new chapter showing up?! *Hyperventilates* I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS, GOSH DARNIT!

*Ten minutes later* STILL NOT THERE!

*Twenty minutes later* Why does God hate me so?!

*Half an hour* ...Hey...in the url...if I just change the chapter number from /15/...to /16/...

*New chapter pops up* YAYAYAYAYAY! *Dances*

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Little did I know that the real url to the new chapter was in the e-mail *Sweatdrop*

ATA, this was a GREAT story. The ending...was so...perfect! Everything was tied in together! I was so HAPPY! For once in my life, I had the urge to go "Oh...aw...that's so cute!"...okay...so maybe not for the first time in my life...

My Solemn Oath to You will forever remain one of my favorites. Congratulations on finishing it!