It's cool...but its practically the actually chapter rewritten. _;; Though, I do understand what you were hinting at.

-smirks-

Ahw.. it still grabs me.

Cute, scary, loving, sad, everything..

It's a perfect scene, no?

I loved this part of the anime. I don't read it, I have to watch it. I know I know I'm too poor to aford the books right know. But this was really good. You might want to continue, I don't know. But keep it up and all that jazz!

0.0;; Oh, das very pretty! I haven't read that far, so I'm not quite sure... Well, it's good anyway! Keep it up!